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9/1/2013 c2 Aabluedragon
I see. I understand why you decided to scrap the Rainbowian. Makes things much simpler. You can still use the language in the future, however.
Example: Rainbowian cuss words 8D

About the relationship between Rome and Veni...

Italy is to HRE as Rainbow Factory is to Roman Empire?
8/31/2013 c1 Aabluedragon
Don't delete the first! Reading that gives a slight background on the new story and it's awesome all the same.

In the last paragraph, you write "Within three hours" when "After three hours" would make more sense. Just though you should know. Also, Vikings didn't have horns on their helmets. The horns were drinking horns. We're the Vikings Danish, Norwegian, or Swedish? Just curious.

I got more recognition? OДO
8/31/2013 c1 Lizi Rose
Nooooo! Poor veni!

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