9/2/2013 c1 Datewithdestiny
Nice harry wont be too dependent on luck like in d original one...

9/1/2013 c1 2mwinter1
That little bit with Snape there is wrong. Unless he has inside knowledge, from Dumbledore portrait, which can't happen yet, he shouldn't know about the Dursley's moving, so plot hole here on your first chapter. Awaiting more.