for Offhanded Comments2/12/2015 c1 
19Idunnowhy
Nerdy! Nerdy nerdy nerdy. Nerdy. Nerdy.
Okay. Geek-gasm over. As the girl who definitely gets hooked in under the "bro code" for trouble shooting the computer software, I totally get this. And I think it's hilarious that she's stuck in this weird little weeble wobble with him. Wibbley wobbley timey wimey...and yes, I should shut up and go to sleep, but I've been trying for MONTHS to carve out time to read this and now I'm here and...
Yeah. Anyway. I love it :) Very on point, and totally something that would actually happen with these two, who I absolutely see hooking up because c'mon, who doesn't, right?
19IdunnowhyNerdy! Nerdy nerdy nerdy. Nerdy. Nerdy.
Okay. Geek-gasm over. As the girl who definitely gets hooked in under the "bro code" for trouble shooting the computer software, I totally get this. And I think it's hilarious that she's stuck in this weird little weeble wobble with him. Wibbley wobbley timey wimey...and yes, I should shut up and go to sleep, but I've been trying for MONTHS to carve out time to read this and now I'm here and...
Yeah. Anyway. I love it :) Very on point, and totally something that would actually happen with these two, who I absolutely see hooking up because c'mon, who doesn't, right?
8/10/2014 c1 6watlocked
I love it. And I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who writes like this. Honestly I love reading stuff that is written this way, so I try to write that way so that I'll like reading what I wrote. If that makes any sense at all. I really liked this though.
6watlockedI love it. And I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who writes like this. Honestly I love reading stuff that is written this way, so I try to write that way so that I'll like reading what I wrote. If that makes any sense at all. I really liked this though.
7/9/2014 c1 Amber
This was fun and funny. I agree the actor Stephan Amell is a natural flirt. I think that's why he is so darn charming. Between that and the natural chemistry between him and Emily Bett Rikers. Grin, it sure must make it tough to write in other female characters on the show. This was great.
This was fun and funny. I agree the actor Stephan Amell is a natural flirt. I think that's why he is so darn charming. Between that and the natural chemistry between him and Emily Bett Rikers. Grin, it sure must make it tough to write in other female characters on the show. This was great.
12/31/2013 c1 8brittany.barbour1
I love this- by far the best take on Olicity that I have read- I too binge watched the entire show in a weekend, up to the season two winter finale, and read way too much fan fics... I agree about felicity not being a damsel in distress- this was absolutely fabulous.
8brittany.barbour1I love this- by far the best take on Olicity that I have read- I too binge watched the entire show in a weekend, up to the season two winter finale, and read way too much fan fics... I agree about felicity not being a damsel in distress- this was absolutely fabulous.
12/28/2013 c1 nutcase29
your characterisation is amazing! i totally agree with what you said about Felicity before and I love that in this she's not head over heels for him (like the is in SO many other olicity fics) ... i just love the whole fic tbh :D
your characterisation is amazing! i totally agree with what you said about Felicity before and I love that in this she's not head over heels for him (like the is in SO many other olicity fics) ... i just love the whole fic tbh :D
11/8/2013 c1 KM
Loveddddddd itttt! I love embracing the natural flirt in Oliver without turning it into some giant romance where Felicity is goo and he suddenly realizes his desperate love for her. She's a good looking girl, and you have her entire thought process remaining kind and friendly and smart and very, very aware of exactly who Oliver is and isn;t .I may have a small Olicity addiction lately, but I think this is one of the best dynamics between them that I've read in quite some time and you didn't even need some steamyness!
Loveddddddd itttt! I love embracing the natural flirt in Oliver without turning it into some giant romance where Felicity is goo and he suddenly realizes his desperate love for her. She's a good looking girl, and you have her entire thought process remaining kind and friendly and smart and very, very aware of exactly who Oliver is and isn;t .I may have a small Olicity addiction lately, but I think this is one of the best dynamics between them that I've read in quite some time and you didn't even need some steamyness!
9/5/2013 c1 2Ghostfile
What an endearing story! It's fun to see how Felicity struggles with Oliver's attention because she's trying to figure out what the best balance is between flattery for having an attractive man pay attention to her and exasperation at a friend playfully having fun.
It's a lovely show of Oliver's depth of feeling for someone he cares a lot about. I really like how you channeled his intensity into a positive and fun avenue. I'd definitely be happy to be in Felicity's shoes, though I think I'd be a pile of goo if I were on the receiving end of even a part of Oliver's intense feelings.
Thanks for the story.
2GhostfileWhat an endearing story! It's fun to see how Felicity struggles with Oliver's attention because she's trying to figure out what the best balance is between flattery for having an attractive man pay attention to her and exasperation at a friend playfully having fun.
It's a lovely show of Oliver's depth of feeling for someone he cares a lot about. I really like how you channeled his intensity into a positive and fun avenue. I'd definitely be happy to be in Felicity's shoes, though I think I'd be a pile of goo if I were on the receiving end of even a part of Oliver's intense feelings.
Thanks for the story.
9/4/2013 c1 11bluebell-uk
Love it, so many fics have her as the 'I need rescuing' type but that is not her. I mean her first mission as an official team arrow member and she is telling the boys to get away from her incase the bomb round her neck goes boom.
I would love to read more of these type of stories this is going to be the joing the select few Arrow stories on my favourites list. (this makes it 3 arrow stories)
11bluebell-ukLove it, so many fics have her as the 'I need rescuing' type but that is not her. I mean her first mission as an official team arrow member and she is telling the boys to get away from her incase the bomb round her neck goes boom.
I would love to read more of these type of stories this is going to be the joing the select few Arrow stories on my favourites list. (this makes it 3 arrow stories)
9/3/2013 c1 18KrasnyCassandra
I loved this. The story flowed effortlessly and your characterizations were good. I will admit to being slightly offended, though, as I am also a writer of Olicity fiction and I try VERY hard not to make Felicity a damsel in distress.
18KrasnyCassandraI loved this. The story flowed effortlessly and your characterizations were good. I will admit to being slightly offended, though, as I am also a writer of Olicity fiction and I try VERY hard not to make Felicity a damsel in distress.
9/2/2013 c1 24Absentia
Oh, this was WONDERFUL. Just lovely. I really loved the dynamic you built between them, and all off a single comment and a flip, quick response. And indeed, I love a well-written Felicity who doesn't just helplessly fawn all over Oliver and reorient her entire life to be all about him. This was really too short, I could happily see it go on endlessly. Or at the very least, more Arrow fic from you. At the VERY least. Here's hoping.
24AbsentiaOh, this was WONDERFUL. Just lovely. I really loved the dynamic you built between them, and all off a single comment and a flip, quick response. And indeed, I love a well-written Felicity who doesn't just helplessly fawn all over Oliver and reorient her entire life to be all about him. This was really too short, I could happily see it go on endlessly. Or at the very least, more Arrow fic from you. At the VERY least. Here's hoping.