for Memories of Somebody9/3/2014 c6 Notmyrealname
Just wanted to point out the mistake in this chapter,if the hollow pierced her how come she is not a soul?
Just wanted to point out the mistake in this chapter,if the hollow pierced her how come she is not a soul?
9/2/2014 c6 laslobos
Loveing the story and i understand school comes first. All that aside the story so far is amazing keep up the good work
Loveing the story and i understand school comes first. All that aside the story so far is amazing keep up the good work
8/31/2014 c5 Nanodayo
Please make more
Please make more
8/15/2014 c5 Xxdreamergirl95xX
Oh my God!Oh my God!Oh my God!What will happen?!You killed me with this cliffhanger!Listen you have to update soon cuz i can't wit to see what's next!
Oh my God!Oh my God!Oh my God!What will happen?!You killed me with this cliffhanger!Listen you have to update soon cuz i can't wit to see what's next!
8/14/2014 c5 
4Hell's Butterflies
I really liked this chapter. Even though Grimmjow is somewhat of an ass at least he protects her. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens with Nicara and getting injured by the hollow. I'm curious to see Grimmjow's reaction to her getting injured.
4Hell's ButterfliesI really liked this chapter. Even though Grimmjow is somewhat of an ass at least he protects her. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens with Nicara and getting injured by the hollow. I'm curious to see Grimmjow's reaction to her getting injured.
6/16/2014 c3 Lexnewt
I really like the storyline you came up with and even though there are a couple writing errors, I still really like this story. Please update it!
I really like the storyline you came up with and even though there are a couple writing errors, I still really like this story. Please update it!
6/14/2014 c3 Last Alice
I do hope the next chapter will be posted soon! Yours is one of the few OC fics I like because its so good :) It definitely deserves more reviews and attention! You do a very good job of keeping everyone in character so far. Will there be any other pairings in this? I do hope you decide to include some more . I really like this story and will definitely be keeping a close eye on it XD
I do hope the next chapter will be posted soon! Yours is one of the few OC fics I like because its so good :) It definitely deserves more reviews and attention! You do a very good job of keeping everyone in character so far. Will there be any other pairings in this? I do hope you decide to include some more . I really like this story and will definitely be keeping a close eye on it XD
6/14/2014 c2 Last Alice
Hahaha! Things are picking up between the two of two and Grimmjow is perfectly in character C;
Hahaha! Things are picking up between the two of two and Grimmjow is perfectly in character C;
6/14/2014 c1 Last Alice
I like your OC :) I'm glad you didn't make her a super pretty or something nobody. She doesn't seem Mary-Sue and thats very hard to find in OC centered fics. Good job so far!
I like your OC :) I'm glad you didn't make her a super pretty or something nobody. She doesn't seem Mary-Sue and thats very hard to find in OC centered fics. Good job so far!
9/12/2013 c1 sam
I like the premise of the story. keep those chapters coming.
I look forward to seeing more :)
I like the premise of the story. keep those chapters coming.
I look forward to seeing more :)
9/1/2013 c1 4Indysicive
Firstly, "unfimilliar" should be spelled "unfamiliar".
So, aside from that. I really enjoyed your story, although there are some typos - you put "Yeay" instead of "Yeah", and "Nacara" instead of "Nicara" too, somewhere. One question I'd like to ask: Is Nicara supposed to be so meek (as in, is that her personality)? I just wanted to make sure, since that's the impression I get from the story so far.
You did well not incorporating 'love at first sight', which by the way, I hate. XD
Keep up the good work
-Azure
4IndysiciveFirstly, "unfimilliar" should be spelled "unfamiliar".
So, aside from that. I really enjoyed your story, although there are some typos - you put "Yeay" instead of "Yeah", and "Nacara" instead of "Nicara" too, somewhere. One question I'd like to ask: Is Nicara supposed to be so meek (as in, is that her personality)? I just wanted to make sure, since that's the impression I get from the story so far.
You did well not incorporating 'love at first sight', which by the way, I hate. XD
Keep up the good work
-Azure