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10/17/2014 c7 laslobos
Really good chapter cant wait for the next hope to see u soon take care
9/3/2014 c6 Notmyrealname
Just wanted to point out the mistake in this chapter,if the hollow pierced her how come she is not a soul?
9/2/2014 c6 Xxdreamergirl95xX
AWWW I loved this chapter!It was great!
9/2/2014 c6 laslobos
Loveing the story and i understand school comes first. All that aside the story so far is amazing keep up the good work
8/31/2014 c5 Nanodayo
Please make more
8/15/2014 c5 Xxdreamergirl95xX
Oh my God!Oh my God!Oh my God!What will happen?!You killed me with this cliffhanger!Listen you have to update soon cuz i can't wit to see what's next!
8/14/2014 c5 4Hell's Butterflies
I really liked this chapter. Even though Grimmjow is somewhat of an ass at least he protects her. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens with Nicara and getting injured by the hollow. I'm curious to see Grimmjow's reaction to her getting injured.
6/25/2014 c3 Xxdreamergirl95xX
Love this story!Great job!Update soon!
6/16/2014 c3 Lexnewt
I really like the storyline you came up with and even though there are a couple writing errors, I still really like this story. Please update it!
6/14/2014 c3 Last Alice
I do hope the next chapter will be posted soon! Yours is one of the few OC fics I like because its so good :) It definitely deserves more reviews and attention! You do a very good job of keeping everyone in character so far. Will there be any other pairings in this? I do hope you decide to include some more . I really like this story and will definitely be keeping a close eye on it XD
6/14/2014 c2 Last Alice
Hahaha! Things are picking up between the two of two and Grimmjow is perfectly in character C;
6/14/2014 c1 Last Alice
I like your OC :) I'm glad you didn't make her a super pretty or something nobody. She doesn't seem Mary-Sue and thats very hard to find in OC centered fics. Good job so far!
3/6/2014 c2 sonicboom380
Please continue
9/12/2013 c1 sam
I like the premise of the story. keep those chapters coming.
I look forward to seeing more :)
9/1/2013 c1 4Indysicive
Firstly, "unfimilliar" should be spelled "unfamiliar".

So, aside from that. I really enjoyed your story, although there are some typos - you put "Yeay" instead of "Yeah", and "Nacara" instead of "Nicara" too, somewhere. One question I'd like to ask: Is Nicara supposed to be so meek (as in, is that her personality)? I just wanted to make sure, since that's the impression I get from the story so far.

You did well not incorporating 'love at first sight', which by the way, I hate. XD

Keep up the good work

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