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7/23/2014 c3 thunder18
Great chapter Update soon
7/22/2014 c7 idea.getthe
What? There I thought this story finally has a update... You lied to me... Why...
6/27/2014 c1 Guest
This story has so much potential... why was it discontinued?
6/10/2014 c6 12N7 Greek-Valkyrie
Damn this was a cool story so far, to bad it's on hiatus or something, Dattebayo.
4/11/2014 c1 BTN Deleted
The first chapter seems a little rushed, maybe you could try fleshing out the part where Orochimaru experiments on Naruto giving it more detail and depth
3/8/2014 c6 Yuniverse
I love the story but your chapters are WAYYYY to short:(
2/17/2014 c5 7jh831
good story, hope you get your muse back soon
1/29/2014 c1 roboguy45
Kushina kinda reborn LOL.
1/10/2014 c3 YOURLORDANDMASTEROFINTERESTING
your biggest failing is your chapters are to short
12/15/2013 c5 Lillian
Please continue with this story because it sounds really interesting. The whole Naruto now a girl and a mini Kushina is really funny. The only other thing I would suggest is longer chapters!
12/1/2013 c4 Lady Naru Ravenclaw
sweet i lov it
11/12/2013 c4 Dontforgettologout.lessontime
Want more chapters please!
10/10/2013 c3 Guest
make her kushina/haku/honoka
9/25/2013 c3 Nyphn Yerbak
Your rushing through the story and although it is a great idea your putting me off by listing as in your leaving out peoples thoughts, reactions, emotions ect... try not to rush through and put yourself in the characters point of view write like its you thats experiencing this otherwise you'll make them seem robotic.
I do like the plot so far so please see this as me hating it i'm just easily irratated when characters are unresponsive to situations or are robotic.
Update soon
9/25/2013 c3 Guest
Kushina/Haku/TenTen
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