for Tantalisers9/1/2013 c1 
6chocaholic123
I love the way you shift the pov around to Carlisle and Esme, it's genius. Adore the imagery of a young Edward and Bella sleeping all night in the car, curled up together. Perfect, can't wait for the next one!
6chocaholic123I love the way you shift the pov around to Carlisle and Esme, it's genius. Adore the imagery of a young Edward and Bella sleeping all night in the car, curled up together. Perfect, can't wait for the next one!
9/1/2013 c1 11SparrowNotes24
I LOVE this. Especially as it's from C&Es POV. I can just imagine them asleep in the car. Awe. Yay only 24 to go :) xx
11SparrowNotes24I LOVE this. Especially as it's from C&Es POV. I can just imagine them asleep in the car. Awe. Yay only 24 to go :) xx