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9/7/2013 c2 wonderwoman1970
this is really cool I like that even thou she is retired that she retired as a Major and still gots her skills can't wait for more.
9/7/2013 c1 wonderwoman1970
ooh this is a good story I like it when it's not so much to the actual episodes, there more imaginative and better.
9/7/2013 c2 12LoneWolfOneill
Your story is very entertaining. The way jack behaves (although its generally misbehaving)
Is interesting. Took a while to warm up to Carter. Their work outs and reactions are acts of infatuated teenagers, cute. Keep up the good writing.
9/7/2013 c2 mmkbrook
Seems Jack is smitten with Sam. Wonder how long it will take for him to ask Sam out on a date. She isn't in his command because she is a civilian. Here is hoping that it comes sooner than later.
9/7/2013 c1 mmkbrook
Very nice start, and a departure from the usual retelling of the first meeting of Jack and Sam.
9/6/2013 c1 70BettyHall223
This is good and I like how Jack is reacting to Sam. Please update soon.
9/3/2013 c1 Guest
Keep going! Please!
9/3/2013 c1 mary a
Off to a great start...i look forwardvto reading more! Thanks for sharing!
9/3/2013 c1 TrailWave
Love it so far! Can't wait for more!

Caity
9/3/2013 c1 2louisa78
An excellent start, like the way you have changed things around, giving us a different slant. Look forward to more.
9/3/2013 c1 K'MI.974
I like it so far, I definitely want to see more of this!
9/3/2013 c1 1jennifer1213
It's good
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