for The Broken Boy3/28 c3 
2fancyspinner
I think I’m going to very much enjoy the story. In particular, I like how you have them developing different relationships with each other.
2fancyspinnerI think I’m going to very much enjoy the story. In particular, I like how you have them developing different relationships with each other.
3/5 c30 Elvell
How fantastic! How wonderful! It’s brilliant that you were able to have both good and evil Dumbledore. I’m excited to see where Tom and Harry’s relationship goes next. Dolohov makes an interesting villain and I would love to learn more about him! How long has death been influencing him? What were his thoughts on the muggle prison system?
How fantastic! How wonderful! It’s brilliant that you were able to have both good and evil Dumbledore. I’m excited to see where Tom and Harry’s relationship goes next. Dolohov makes an interesting villain and I would love to learn more about him! How long has death been influencing him? What were his thoughts on the muggle prison system?
3/3 c30 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
3/2 c30 mizzrazz72
Dumbledore shouldn't have put Harry on the spot like that. Harry already has a big target on his back.
Dumbledore shouldn't have put Harry on the spot like that. Harry already has a big target on his back.
3/23/2024 c29 Eolyon
Esta historia es preciosa ojalá siguieras escribiendo, me encanta. Gracias por escribirla
Esta historia es preciosa ojalá siguieras escribiendo, me encanta. Gracias por escribirla
1/10/2024 c3 Guest
This story has promise but I can't read it anymore the author is making decently-sized changes that should change some events from Canon but forces them to pass simply because he doesn't have an idea besides following Canon I may be wrong for later chapters but this is where I stop didn't have a good hook
This story has promise but I can't read it anymore the author is making decently-sized changes that should change some events from Canon but forces them to pass simply because he doesn't have an idea besides following Canon I may be wrong for later chapters but this is where I stop didn't have a good hook
11/30/2023 c29 Home World Security
An incredible story thus far! I hope to see new chapters soon. Keep up the great work.
An incredible story thus far! I hope to see new chapters soon. Keep up the great work.
11/3/2023 c29 2AvidReader2425
Thank you very much for another excellent chapter, and I really enjoy the more humorous aspects in this chapter, and the fact that Harry was able to flex his abilities more. I think it was a nice response from some of the depressing aspects of his overall life.
2AvidReader2425Thank you very much for another excellent chapter, and I really enjoy the more humorous aspects in this chapter, and the fact that Harry was able to flex his abilities more. I think it was a nice response from some of the depressing aspects of his overall life.
10/23/2023 c29 mizzrazz72
Dumbledore is not doing anything about the plot to kill Harry. Why does death hate Harry?
Dumbledore is not doing anything about the plot to kill Harry. Why does death hate Harry?