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4/12/2018 c1 Violette
This was so cute ! I love it!
3/24/2015 c1 zekeschance
Aww, I really liked this. It was just a little hard to read with the sentences so bunched up but the story and message was good. Thanks!
4/25/2014 c1 86supernaturalsammy67
This was beautiful hun! You have amazing description and feeling to your wording.

:) What a brilliant moment with the lads ;) xx

Much love! Excellent first fic hun ! x
11/12/2013 c1 29CeCe Away
This is lovely reflection on Dean's part.
9/7/2013 c1 1firenovaphoenix
Thank you for all the reviews :) I'll definitely be sure to use the suggestions that have been pulled to my attention.
I'll continue to write more fan fics periodically, and hopefully those will get as good reviews that this piece able to. Thanks again!
9/5/2013 c1 Guest
it was a lovely and beautiful story
9/6/2013 c1 7tenner
This is quite impressive for a first effort! It was quite emotive and very in character. You should write more. The only constructive crit I can give you is to get a beta reader. Other than that, should should keep writing The more you do it, the better you get.
9/4/2013 c1 Guest
Congratulations on your first piece.
Great job! And I loved the ending.
A small suggestion, though. It would be really helpful if you would break up the longer paragraphs; it is a bit difficult to follow in the format you're using.
Thanks for sharing this. I look forward to seeing more from you.
TG
9/4/2013 c1 reannablue
Very nice :)

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