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for In him we have redemption, and the forgiveness of sins by his blood

1/28/2020 c1 8WordSmyth
An interesting story, but your grammar leaves a whole lot to be desired.
7/15/2015 c9 10Final Pharaoh
So what other pairings are going to be in this besides Albido x Breach?
7/15/2015 c9 199Danny vs A Month
good. chapters could be longer but still. also, this will most likely be the last chapter I review for a very long while. Life calls and all that. keep up the good work anyway.
4/12/2015 c8 Danny vs A Month
wow. been a long time. There were a lot of grammar errors in this chapter, and the others, looking back on them, but it's still good, if a bit hard to follow. Update soon.
9/7/2014 c7 camewtwo
Huh I like how they have different reasons.
9/7/2014 c6 camewtwo
Poor Breach.
9/7/2014 c5 camewtwo
What is going on in Chicago.
9/7/2014 c4 camewtwo
Good story I don't know a beta reader for you, sorry.
9/7/2014 c3 camewtwo
Good story love the supernatural theme
9/7/2014 c2 camewtwo
second round as good as the first.
9/7/2014 c1 camewtwo
Good story pal.
8/27/2014 c7 Danny vs A Month
good chapter, still a little short and the grammar could use a little work but aside from that it's good.
8/26/2014 c7 theskinnymaninsane
More please!
8/25/2014 c7 18iamthesea
Wow, this is amazing.
7/7/2014 c6 theskinnymaninsane
In my opinion Breach liked Albedo, or not ?!xD Cool made, please continue
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