for Till We Meet Again8/28/2015 c1 DispleasedAuthor
Can u plz leave normal reviews? Ur so annoying.
Can u plz leave normal reviews? Ur so annoying.
8/27/2015 c3 
5Nella Moonblood Royalle
hmm wow intriguing storyline...
hope you'll continue this coz i really wanna what's going on and gonna happen...
Ganbatte nee!
5Nella Moonblood Royallehmm wow intriguing storyline...
hope you'll continue this coz i really wanna what's going on and gonna happen...
Ganbatte nee!
5/10/2015 c1 Ukulele
hey, uh, listen, not to be rude or anything, becuz after all we're all human, but could you be a bit more personal in your reviews? i mean, i'm glad you review people's storys unlike people who don't, but everytime the same line gets a bit.. uh... anoying for people...
hey, uh, listen, not to be rude or anything, becuz after all we're all human, but could you be a bit more personal in your reviews? i mean, i'm glad you review people's storys unlike people who don't, but everytime the same line gets a bit.. uh... anoying for people...
4/5/2014 c3 Guest
Update the frealing awesome story.
Update the frealing awesome story.
2/9/2014 c3 please
Hurry up with the next chapter
Hurry up with the next chapter
1/26/2014 c3 13Panda Master X
Urrgh! You have just GOT to update this! Its getting really good, so please UPDATE!
13Panda Master XUrrgh! You have just GOT to update this! Its getting really good, so please UPDATE!
11/2/2013 c1 Cana99 Archive
Also how come Allen doesn't have any innocence but everyone else does? Make up your mind, if he didn't have his innocence he would be dead cause his innocence is patching the hole in his heart
Also how come Allen doesn't have any innocence but everyone else does? Make up your mind, if he didn't have his innocence he would be dead cause his innocence is patching the hole in his heart
11/2/2013 c3 Cana99 Archive
You should stop changing the POV so much, it gets confusing and you might want to think about getting a beta. Your grammar makes it really hard to read.
You should stop changing the POV so much, it gets confusing and you might want to think about getting a beta. Your grammar makes it really hard to read.
9/9/2013 c3 Fan of this Fic
Actually, i haven't read this fic. I just read the summary and think that you're rock at making summary. That's interesting and making me wanting read this fic. When i have free time, i'll read it all.
I also hope that you'll update next chapter ASAP.
Ganbatte!
Actually, i haven't read this fic. I just read the summary and think that you're rock at making summary. That's interesting and making me wanting read this fic. When i have free time, i'll read it all.
I also hope that you'll update next chapter ASAP.
Ganbatte!
9/9/2013 c3 8timcanpy's pen
You're welcome! Uhmm...by the way, could you do something about your grammar? I know I'm not one to talk because I'm not good in English. Uh, you see...most of the time you forgot to put apostrophie 's' and it brought me some minor confusion. Anyway, you really reminded me of myself when I first wrote my fanfic. I know you will do good & here's an advice...search for 'allen the musician', he's an author and read some of his works. His stories were great & it helped me to do better.
By the way...Red doesn't have his innocence? What happened to his left arm then? And oh! I want to know so badly what Jake could do w/ his innocence.
Looking forward for the next chapter!
Thank you and have a nice day! : )
8timcanpy's penYou're welcome! Uhmm...by the way, could you do something about your grammar? I know I'm not one to talk because I'm not good in English. Uh, you see...most of the time you forgot to put apostrophie 's' and it brought me some minor confusion. Anyway, you really reminded me of myself when I first wrote my fanfic. I know you will do good & here's an advice...search for 'allen the musician', he's an author and read some of his works. His stories were great & it helped me to do better.
By the way...Red doesn't have his innocence? What happened to his left arm then? And oh! I want to know so badly what Jake could do w/ his innocence.
Looking forward for the next chapter!
Thank you and have a nice day! : )
9/8/2013 c2 Raine
Nice chapter we have there. Now I wonder what happened to the Order or rather, what's up on their sleeves...and the Noahs!
Uhmm...since Jake is Red's apprentice then he's an exorcist? And if yes, then...what is his innocence? Oh gawd ... update soonie...i wanna know!
And thank you for the chappie! Have a nice day! .
Nice chapter we have there. Now I wonder what happened to the Order or rather, what's up on their sleeves...and the Noahs!
Uhmm...since Jake is Red's apprentice then he's an exorcist? And if yes, then...what is his innocence? Oh gawd ... update soonie...i wanna know!
And thank you for the chappie! Have a nice day! .
9/4/2013 c1 Raine
you have a good start, but I suggest you to describe the scene more as clearly as you can. and...please separate each thoughts for each person, i mean this - " " - 'cause it confuses me. but over all, I like the idea of your story. uhmm...is Jake's master Allen?
I can't wait for your next update. : )
I wonder how will Allen's friends react when they meet once again now that he has no cursed eye and his hair reverted back to its real color. and...I'm looking forward for longer chapters.
thank you and have a nice day! _
you have a good start, but I suggest you to describe the scene more as clearly as you can. and...please separate each thoughts for each person, i mean this - " " - 'cause it confuses me. but over all, I like the idea of your story. uhmm...is Jake's master Allen?
I can't wait for your next update. : )
I wonder how will Allen's friends react when they meet once again now that he has no cursed eye and his hair reverted back to its real color. and...I'm looking forward for longer chapters.
thank you and have a nice day! _