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Interesting. Peter Pan never was sweet, I thought. This story kind of showcases the bad boy.
84Inudaughter ReturnsInteresting. Peter Pan never was sweet, I thought. This story kind of showcases the bad boy.
5/25/2014 c9 A Peter-Panian
Are you going to update this?
Are you going to update this?
1/11/2014 c7 suomynona
hey there, leather lovin' lady
first off, so sorry about the no reviews for a while. I retreated under my rock for a bit, but now I'm ready to rejoin the world, I think.
Okie dokes let's roll.
The river scene was perfect. Peter's anger, the boy's antics, they were all great. and the whole Daphne wants to get clean thinking leading up to it was damn good. It made sense. It was funny. 10/10 scene. Well done.
There is one little thing that's been bothering me. I'm sure you have your reasons for this, but Peter is just a little bit too surly. A little too OOC. I understand he's changed against his will and he's probably not coping well with that, but perhaps a little of the old Peter might do this story some good? A few pranks for old times' sake?
Apart from that, the characters are great. Daphne is really starting to shine. And Matt is giving Josh a run for his money for favorite Lost Boy. I would love to see a little one on one time with any of them! How many of them are you going to kill off? No, don't tell me, but don't break my heart either! (just kidding, DO break my heart, I love it)
Pacing is decent in these past few chapters. Little slow, but this mermaid spin is gonna fix that real quick I bet! Dialogue is fantastic. Daphne's point of view is hilarious. And you're not rushing the romance! Props to you on that one!
Let's see what else... I'm super interested in your take on Wendy. I just have a weird soft spot for her and I really want to know how she fits in this story. I like what I've heard so far, and I hope we get to see more of that.
Uh... I guess that's it. Gosh, my reviews are always all over the place aren't they?
PS. Wouldn't it be so cute if Josh's voice didn't age and he sounds like a kid again? Ha, just a funny thought I had. Well, that's assuming Daphne gets it back... and now I'm writing your story for you... sorry.
hey there, leather lovin' lady
first off, so sorry about the no reviews for a while. I retreated under my rock for a bit, but now I'm ready to rejoin the world, I think.
Okie dokes let's roll.
The river scene was perfect. Peter's anger, the boy's antics, they were all great. and the whole Daphne wants to get clean thinking leading up to it was damn good. It made sense. It was funny. 10/10 scene. Well done.
There is one little thing that's been bothering me. I'm sure you have your reasons for this, but Peter is just a little bit too surly. A little too OOC. I understand he's changed against his will and he's probably not coping well with that, but perhaps a little of the old Peter might do this story some good? A few pranks for old times' sake?
Apart from that, the characters are great. Daphne is really starting to shine. And Matt is giving Josh a run for his money for favorite Lost Boy. I would love to see a little one on one time with any of them! How many of them are you going to kill off? No, don't tell me, but don't break my heart either! (just kidding, DO break my heart, I love it)
Pacing is decent in these past few chapters. Little slow, but this mermaid spin is gonna fix that real quick I bet! Dialogue is fantastic. Daphne's point of view is hilarious. And you're not rushing the romance! Props to you on that one!
Let's see what else... I'm super interested in your take on Wendy. I just have a weird soft spot for her and I really want to know how she fits in this story. I like what I've heard so far, and I hope we get to see more of that.
Uh... I guess that's it. Gosh, my reviews are always all over the place aren't they?
PS. Wouldn't it be so cute if Josh's voice didn't age and he sounds like a kid again? Ha, just a funny thought I had. Well, that's assuming Daphne gets it back... and now I'm writing your story for you... sorry.
1/8/2014 c7 21lady lutka
Don't fret too much about the review flood gates closing; this is the best Peter Pan and OC by far.
Your writing style is easy to follow, and you make good use of the first person view of writing (not too many "I did this and I did that").
There were a coupl grammar mistakes in this last chapter, but they are nothing you can't fix. Overall, a great update!
(You're cliff hanging end was perfect. My reaction? "What? You can't be serious. I mean... GRR!")
((And I am adoring Daphne and Matt's blooming friendship. :) ))
21lady lutkaDon't fret too much about the review flood gates closing; this is the best Peter Pan and OC by far.
Your writing style is easy to follow, and you make good use of the first person view of writing (not too many "I did this and I did that").
There were a coupl grammar mistakes in this last chapter, but they are nothing you can't fix. Overall, a great update!
(You're cliff hanging end was perfect. My reaction? "What? You can't be serious. I mean... GRR!")
((And I am adoring Daphne and Matt's blooming friendship. :) ))
1/7/2014 c7 Kiki2344
Great chapter! Although Peter is a bit of a jerk XD Cant wait for the next chapter XD
Great chapter! Although Peter is a bit of a jerk XD Cant wait for the next chapter XD
1/4/2014 c6 Guest
More plz!
More plz!
11/20/2013 c4 aaargh
gosh darn fanfiction wont let me review, so here i go a fourth time and from a phone again. sorry. the one on my computer is a lot longer.
ok, great great great chapter. every single paragraph was so entertaining. i love joshs story and im so excited to read daphne vs the mermaids. great set up for the next chapter.
daphne is really starting to flesh out. i would like to see a little more of her flaws, but this is still a good pace to be introducing her with so keep at it.
i really did have a lot more to say, but im gonna have to skip to the fairy name, sorry.
ok, after a fairly long googling session i came up with...aria poppydew. or poppyheather. poppy something. thinking about daphnes name got me thinking about the god apollo, which got me thinking about music, which led me to Aria. and poppy sounds spunky. i thought they went well together.
you dont have to use it. im just glad to be able to repay you for an awesome story.
gosh darn fanfiction wont let me review, so here i go a fourth time and from a phone again. sorry. the one on my computer is a lot longer.
ok, great great great chapter. every single paragraph was so entertaining. i love joshs story and im so excited to read daphne vs the mermaids. great set up for the next chapter.
daphne is really starting to flesh out. i would like to see a little more of her flaws, but this is still a good pace to be introducing her with so keep at it.
i really did have a lot more to say, but im gonna have to skip to the fairy name, sorry.
ok, after a fairly long googling session i came up with...aria poppydew. or poppyheather. poppy something. thinking about daphnes name got me thinking about the god apollo, which got me thinking about music, which led me to Aria. and poppy sounds spunky. i thought they went well together.
you dont have to use it. im just glad to be able to repay you for an awesome story.
11/19/2013 c2 Guest
Oh man, my review somehow got lost... that blows.
Ok, I'm trying again.
Anon is back!
First off, Josh is a wonderful character. His back story is awesome. Hands down, he's my favorite. This whole plan to get his voice back is a great way to get the boys warmed up to Daphne. I'm loving it.
Daphne is becoming a very fun character. She is so hilariously outnumbered and ignored. It's fun to read her try to be accepted. Also, I can't wait to see Daphne vs. the mermaids.
This chapter was really great. Not a lot of action, but it sets up for the next one very well. It was well written, interesting, and funny. It kinda feels like it's rushing just a smidge, but that's not so terrible. It's much better than being too slow. Perhaps longer chapters might help?
I'm sensing a bit of Wendy hate in here... ;) Am I wrong?
Okie dokes, so you asked for a fairy name. Any reader that doesn't give you one is an ungrateful swine! Alright, I actually did some semi-serious googling for this one so here goes...
Aria Poppyheather. or Poppydew. Poppy-something.
Ok, so Aria just sounds pretty to me. Daphne, greek nymph, greek god Apollo, music- and that's pretty much how I got Aria. Poppy is a spunky name. So Aria's elegance plus the spunk of Poppy. I thought it made a good combo.
You won't hurt my feelings if you don't use it. As long as it at least gets you thinking about names you DO want to use. I try to help.
Thank you for the lovely update. (trying to put this in chapter 2 because fanfiction wont let me post it for some reason)
Oh man, my review somehow got lost... that blows.
Ok, I'm trying again.
Anon is back!
First off, Josh is a wonderful character. His back story is awesome. Hands down, he's my favorite. This whole plan to get his voice back is a great way to get the boys warmed up to Daphne. I'm loving it.
Daphne is becoming a very fun character. She is so hilariously outnumbered and ignored. It's fun to read her try to be accepted. Also, I can't wait to see Daphne vs. the mermaids.
This chapter was really great. Not a lot of action, but it sets up for the next one very well. It was well written, interesting, and funny. It kinda feels like it's rushing just a smidge, but that's not so terrible. It's much better than being too slow. Perhaps longer chapters might help?
I'm sensing a bit of Wendy hate in here... ;) Am I wrong?
Okie dokes, so you asked for a fairy name. Any reader that doesn't give you one is an ungrateful swine! Alright, I actually did some semi-serious googling for this one so here goes...
Aria Poppyheather. or Poppydew. Poppy-something.
Ok, so Aria just sounds pretty to me. Daphne, greek nymph, greek god Apollo, music- and that's pretty much how I got Aria. Poppy is a spunky name. So Aria's elegance plus the spunk of Poppy. I thought it made a good combo.
You won't hurt my feelings if you don't use it. As long as it at least gets you thinking about names you DO want to use. I try to help.
Thank you for the lovely update. (trying to put this in chapter 2 because fanfiction wont let me post it for some reason)
11/19/2013 c4 AnonyMOOOOOO
Oh man, my review somehow got lost... that blows.
Ok, I'm trying again.
Anon is back!
First off, Josh is a wonderful character. His back story is awesome. Hands down, he's my favorite. This whole plan to get his voice back is a great way to get the boys warmed up to Daphne. I'm loving it.
Daphne is becoming a very fun character. She is so hilariously outnumbered and ignored. It's fun to read her try to be accepted. Also, I can't wait to see Daphne vs. the mermaids.
This chapter was really great. Not a lot of action, but it sets up for the next one very well. It was well written, interesting, and funny. It kinda feels like it's rushing just a smidge, but that's not so terrible. It's much better than being too slow. Perhaps longer chapters might help?
I'm sensing a bit of Wendy hate in here... ;) Am I wrong?
Okie dokes, so you asked for a fairy name. Any reader that doesn't give you one is an ungrateful swine! Alright, I actually did some semi-serious googling for this one so here goes...
Aria Poppyheather. or Poppydew. Poppy-something.
Ok, so Aria just sounds pretty to me. Daphne, greek nymph, greek god Apollo, music- and that's pretty much how I got Aria. Poppy is a spunky name. So Aria's elegance plus the spunk of Poppy. I thought it made a good combo.
You won't hurt my feelings if you don't use it. As long as it at least gets you thinking about names you DO want to use. I try to help.
Thank you for the lovely update.
Oh man, my review somehow got lost... that blows.
Ok, I'm trying again.
Anon is back!
First off, Josh is a wonderful character. His back story is awesome. Hands down, he's my favorite. This whole plan to get his voice back is a great way to get the boys warmed up to Daphne. I'm loving it.
Daphne is becoming a very fun character. She is so hilariously outnumbered and ignored. It's fun to read her try to be accepted. Also, I can't wait to see Daphne vs. the mermaids.
This chapter was really great. Not a lot of action, but it sets up for the next one very well. It was well written, interesting, and funny. It kinda feels like it's rushing just a smidge, but that's not so terrible. It's much better than being too slow. Perhaps longer chapters might help?
I'm sensing a bit of Wendy hate in here... ;) Am I wrong?
Okie dokes, so you asked for a fairy name. Any reader that doesn't give you one is an ungrateful swine! Alright, I actually did some semi-serious googling for this one so here goes...
Aria Poppyheather. or Poppydew. Poppy-something.
Ok, so Aria just sounds pretty to me. Daphne, greek nymph, greek god Apollo, music- and that's pretty much how I got Aria. Poppy is a spunky name. So Aria's elegance plus the spunk of Poppy. I thought it made a good combo.
You won't hurt my feelings if you don't use it. As long as it at least gets you thinking about names you DO want to use. I try to help.
Thank you for the lovely update.
11/18/2013 c4 I'm not a moose
Josh is great. I LOVE his back story. Holy crap. Hands down, he's my favorite right now.
Had to get that out of the way. K, review time!
Your imagination is wonderful. This story is so entertaining. There is not a single dull moment in this chapter. I cannot wait for the next one. Daphne vs. the mermaids is gonna be so awesome.
Daphne is shaping up to be a fun character. It's so funny how outnumbered and ignored she is. And it's HILARIOUS that she didn't want to sit with the loser group. Also, I really like Peter's treatment of her.
The writing is fantastic, as always. There's so much personality in it. I love it. I feel maybe the pacing is just a smidge too fast, but hell it's much better than too slow.
In exchange for this lovely chapter, I shall present my suggestion for Daphne's fairy name. I actually thought fairly hard about this so here goes...
Aria Poppyheather. Or Poppydew. Poppy-something.
Why? Well, I simply liked the sound of Aria. Thinking about Apollo and music led me to that. And I think Poppy just sounds really fun. I think they make sense together, since Aria sounds so elegant and Poppy is so spunky.
Won't hurt my feelings if you don't use it. (seriously, don't feel pressured in any way) I just hope it at least gets you thinking about names you wanna use.
Josh is great. I LOVE his back story. Holy crap. Hands down, he's my favorite right now.
Had to get that out of the way. K, review time!
Your imagination is wonderful. This story is so entertaining. There is not a single dull moment in this chapter. I cannot wait for the next one. Daphne vs. the mermaids is gonna be so awesome.
Daphne is shaping up to be a fun character. It's so funny how outnumbered and ignored she is. And it's HILARIOUS that she didn't want to sit with the loser group. Also, I really like Peter's treatment of her.
The writing is fantastic, as always. There's so much personality in it. I love it. I feel maybe the pacing is just a smidge too fast, but hell it's much better than too slow.
In exchange for this lovely chapter, I shall present my suggestion for Daphne's fairy name. I actually thought fairly hard about this so here goes...
Aria Poppyheather. Or Poppydew. Poppy-something.
Why? Well, I simply liked the sound of Aria. Thinking about Apollo and music led me to that. And I think Poppy just sounds really fun. I think they make sense together, since Aria sounds so elegant and Poppy is so spunky.
Won't hurt my feelings if you don't use it. (seriously, don't feel pressured in any way) I just hope it at least gets you thinking about names you wanna use.
11/19/2013 c1 heartbeat7
Awesome update! I love this chapter. I feel like you are writing everything that I want to read. I can't wait for another chapter. This is by far my favorite story.
Awesome update! I love this chapter. I feel like you are writing everything that I want to read. I can't wait for another chapter. This is by far my favorite story.
11/19/2013 c4 Kahlan170
Hey I really love this story and can't wait for your next update! But as for fairy names maybe Dewlight or Dewshine. I'll think more about some and pm you more if you'd like.
Hey I really love this story and can't wait for your next update! But as for fairy names maybe Dewlight or Dewshine. I'll think more about some and pm you more if you'd like.