for painted wings5/3/2021 c1 Blaze Zion
These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook.
These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook.
9/14/2014 c1 
3of snow and hearts
oh my gosh, nina, this is really flawless. i absolutely love your writing, and the way you put this together is so unbelievably perfect. i cried, nina, :)
-favoriting- because this is beyond beautiful and your writing is absolutely stunning, nina, c:
lena
3of snow and heartsoh my gosh, nina, this is really flawless. i absolutely love your writing, and the way you put this together is so unbelievably perfect. i cried, nina, :)
-favoriting- because this is beyond beautiful and your writing is absolutely stunning, nina, c:
lena
2/8/2014 c1 insurgencies
aww this is so cute and yeesh i think i'm going to cry and i haven't ever reviewed anything of yours of my own free will; yikes; anyways, i adore this and i adore you asdfghjkl i might cry
aww this is so cute and yeesh i think i'm going to cry and i haven't ever reviewed anything of yours of my own free will; yikes; anyways, i adore this and i adore you asdfghjkl i might cry
1/28/2014 c1 25outside the crayon box
This is beautiful and incredible and lovely and amazing. Seriously, Nina, I loved this sososososo much.
I loved how you described the scene at the beginning, with the two of them pretending to get married, being egged on by their friends, but sort of liking each other, and they're just having fun but it means something. It was just perfect. The descriptions and details and dialogue were balanced, and the imagery was right on. I would pick favorite lines but I would be copy-and-pasting the whole thing. :)
And then the second section, with the real thing, was so realistic and perfect. The descriptions were great (again) and overall everything was just excellent.
You're a star, Nina. :D
Favoriting, because of course I can't not favorite this.
Heart ya,
Joy
P.S. You have officially inspired me to do a story of the week on my profile. ;)
25outside the crayon boxThis is beautiful and incredible and lovely and amazing. Seriously, Nina, I loved this sososososo much.
I loved how you described the scene at the beginning, with the two of them pretending to get married, being egged on by their friends, but sort of liking each other, and they're just having fun but it means something. It was just perfect. The descriptions and details and dialogue were balanced, and the imagery was right on. I would pick favorite lines but I would be copy-and-pasting the whole thing. :)
And then the second section, with the real thing, was so realistic and perfect. The descriptions were great (again) and overall everything was just excellent.
You're a star, Nina. :D
Favoriting, because of course I can't not favorite this.
Heart ya,
Joy
P.S. You have officially inspired me to do a story of the week on my profile. ;)
11/11/2013 c1 7in the days of wonder
first of all i really like this because it's fluff and i'm in a fluffy mood today! :)
probably already know that massington is my otp (along with dylvert) because... c'mon, who doesn't love 'em. i loved the first time they the married because i'm obsessed with younger version of canon characters. derrick is so confused and massie is just stumbling all over her mom's dress. it makes it seem like they actually are little kids.
("derrick decides he likes massie, a lot. it's sort of why he let her win.") awww, i loved this part (i'm saying love to much, but i guess that's what fluff does to you) you showed how derrick has an interest for massie but in a way a six year old would ;)
the epilogue. THE EPILOGUE! i have all these feels. this fic just went from humor/fluff to full on fluff!
("They have a history, the both of them, from getting married at six, to late-night Big Bang Theory marathons, to arguments, to make-ups, to getting married all over again at twenty-two.") gah, this part is just asdfghjkl! i don't even know why. i guess i'm just thinking about all that massie and derrick have went through and it's making me feel all good inside :)
("They dance to her favorite song, colors by Marc Robillard, and he spins her around four times, Josh muttering something about them being oh-so-cliché and massie giggles.") oh josh, that's the best part about their relationship!
i didn't think this was rushed at all and the prompts acted like they truly belonged there. i already faved this a while ago so now i'm pretty much done with this messed up review
nicole
7in the days of wonderfirst of all i really like this because it's fluff and i'm in a fluffy mood today! :)
probably already know that massington is my otp (along with dylvert) because... c'mon, who doesn't love 'em. i loved the first time they the married because i'm obsessed with younger version of canon characters. derrick is so confused and massie is just stumbling all over her mom's dress. it makes it seem like they actually are little kids.
("derrick decides he likes massie, a lot. it's sort of why he let her win.") awww, i loved this part (i'm saying love to much, but i guess that's what fluff does to you) you showed how derrick has an interest for massie but in a way a six year old would ;)
the epilogue. THE EPILOGUE! i have all these feels. this fic just went from humor/fluff to full on fluff!
("They have a history, the both of them, from getting married at six, to late-night Big Bang Theory marathons, to arguments, to make-ups, to getting married all over again at twenty-two.") gah, this part is just asdfghjkl! i don't even know why. i guess i'm just thinking about all that massie and derrick have went through and it's making me feel all good inside :)
("They dance to her favorite song, colors by Marc Robillard, and he spins her around four times, Josh muttering something about them being oh-so-cliché and massie giggles.") oh josh, that's the best part about their relationship!
i didn't think this was rushed at all and the prompts acted like they truly belonged there. i already faved this a while ago so now i'm pretty much done with this messed up review
nicole
10/6/2013 c1 3glossiers
reviewing as i go along. :)
[The first time they get married, they're six.] oh gosh that first line made me laugh out loud, nina, this was great! :)
oh gosh that first part was so funny and lol sammi..you are just hilarious..and anyway, i loved the whole idea and gosh this was just perfect!
the second part..my favvie line would be;
[Her eyes tear up at the 'till death do us part and he grips her hands a little tighter, grinning when she squeezes back. The priest shoots him a disapproving glance, something Massie thankfully didn't notice, and the guy is too much like Sammi for Derrick to hold back his smile.] nina, that was so funny, and the entire reference to the first "wedding" is just so believeable and this was just beautifully written and that last line is just flawless and asdfghjkl; don't run away, i LOVE it!
/favefavefave
3glossiersreviewing as i go along. :)
[The first time they get married, they're six.] oh gosh that first line made me laugh out loud, nina, this was great! :)
oh gosh that first part was so funny and lol sammi..you are just hilarious..and anyway, i loved the whole idea and gosh this was just perfect!
the second part..my favvie line would be;
[Her eyes tear up at the 'till death do us part and he grips her hands a little tighter, grinning when she squeezes back. The priest shoots him a disapproving glance, something Massie thankfully didn't notice, and the guy is too much like Sammi for Derrick to hold back his smile.] nina, that was so funny, and the entire reference to the first "wedding" is just so believeable and this was just beautifully written and that last line is just flawless and asdfghjkl; don't run away, i LOVE it!
/favefavefave
9/28/2013 c1 6how to catch a moonbeam
Oh my god. This is so beautiful! /cries
Wow Sammi seems like me. I used to make my bro do weird things all the time too lol
But seriously you are amazeballs keep on writing amazeballs stuff!
6how to catch a moonbeamOh my god. This is so beautiful! /cries
Wow Sammi seems like me. I used to make my bro do weird things all the time too lol
But seriously you are amazeballs keep on writing amazeballs stuff!
9/15/2013 c1 weaving endless dreams
im sorry i didnt have time to read this earlier, but now that i have read it, ohmygosh its perfect ! i love love love love love this ! thank u so much !
im sorry i didnt have time to read this earlier, but now that i have read it, ohmygosh its perfect ! i love love love love love this ! thank u so much !
9/14/2013 c1 12splendeur
I love this so much. I can't believe I haven't read it already.
It's amazing, how you completely tied the plot together with the last line and pretty much everything about this is incredible. I love the title (it's perfect for fluff!) and I love the double wedding idea. it's really good nina.
I can't wait until I get to review a multi-chap. *notsonotobvioushint*
splendeur
12splendeurI love this so much. I can't believe I haven't read it already.
It's amazing, how you completely tied the plot together with the last line and pretty much everything about this is incredible. I love the title (it's perfect for fluff!) and I love the double wedding idea. it's really good nina.
I can't wait until I get to review a multi-chap. *notsonotobvioushint*
splendeur
9/14/2013 c1 116lydiamartins
gosh, nina, i can't believe that i haven't read this before but nonono this was definitely not rushed or odd in anyway and everything just turned out perfectly, :) the entire length of the oneshot is a little shorter than i would have had in mind but nevertheless i think that it was even better since it was short and massiederrick is flawless and kid weddings? argh, that makes this even better. they're just so adorable together and thank you SOSOSMUCH for writing something that doesn't constantly break my angsty heart, :) relationships like massington i think deserve to have eternal happiness and this [This time the rings will stay, a reminder of their pure, simple, magical love.] is fluffy and adorable and fluffy is veryvery good, :) it's nice how they progressed together throughout the story and the division of the time periods made this even better; i like the song colors a lot, and i'm really glad that they got their cliché wedding because of all the drama that they've had to go through together ( sort of reminding me of chuckblair from gossip girl ) they deserve a happily ever after wedding with a lot less drama than what was there when they were younger, :) loved this, nina!
xx clara
116lydiamartinsgosh, nina, i can't believe that i haven't read this before but nonono this was definitely not rushed or odd in anyway and everything just turned out perfectly, :) the entire length of the oneshot is a little shorter than i would have had in mind but nevertheless i think that it was even better since it was short and massiederrick is flawless and kid weddings? argh, that makes this even better. they're just so adorable together and thank you SOSOSMUCH for writing something that doesn't constantly break my angsty heart, :) relationships like massington i think deserve to have eternal happiness and this [This time the rings will stay, a reminder of their pure, simple, magical love.] is fluffy and adorable and fluffy is veryvery good, :) it's nice how they progressed together throughout the story and the division of the time periods made this even better; i like the song colors a lot, and i'm really glad that they got their cliché wedding because of all the drama that they've had to go through together ( sort of reminding me of chuckblair from gossip girl ) they deserve a happily ever after wedding with a lot less drama than what was there when they were younger, :) loved this, nina!
xx clara
9/14/2013 c1 8insanities
This is so sweet and adorable Nina! I love the whole one-shot; I find it adorable how they got "married" at six and get married for real at twenty two. I love how you used the prompts, it wasn't terrible at all, it was placed in the story perfectly. I love the fic, it was super fluffy and just so cute. Okay the whole fic is just perfect and the last lines in the first part and the last line in the epilogue are absolutely flawless. Please write more one-shots in the future, and I'm defineintly going to fav this:))
8insanitiesThis is so sweet and adorable Nina! I love the whole one-shot; I find it adorable how they got "married" at six and get married for real at twenty two. I love how you used the prompts, it wasn't terrible at all, it was placed in the story perfectly. I love the fic, it was super fluffy and just so cute. Okay the whole fic is just perfect and the last lines in the first part and the last line in the epilogue are absolutely flawless. Please write more one-shots in the future, and I'm defineintly going to fav this:))
9/10/2013 c1 30strikerstories
Okay, I love love love Massington and this story! It's so cute how you described their first wedding at age 6. I am a sucker for mock weddings done by kids. Too adorable! It was a little bit rushed but I didn't see too many mistakes. All in all, it was fun to read.
30strikerstoriesOkay, I love love love Massington and this story! It's so cute how you described their first wedding at age 6. I am a sucker for mock weddings done by kids. Too adorable! It was a little bit rushed but I didn't see too many mistakes. All in all, it was fun to read.
9/9/2013 c1 8professional ashes of roses
this was inexplicably romantic and cheesy [but in a good way] at the same time. i loved the line, [This time the rings will stay, a reminder of their pure, simple, magical love.] that line just made me realize what true love is supposed to be like, and i loved it so much. i don't think that you used the prompts terribly, and it didn't feel rushed. i don't think i could ever write as beautifully as this. :) this was really good, nina. please write more like these?
ox,
aly
8professional ashes of rosesthis was inexplicably romantic and cheesy [but in a good way] at the same time. i loved the line, [This time the rings will stay, a reminder of their pure, simple, magical love.] that line just made me realize what true love is supposed to be like, and i loved it so much. i don't think that you used the prompts terribly, and it didn't feel rushed. i don't think i could ever write as beautifully as this. :) this was really good, nina. please write more like these?
ox,
aly
9/8/2013 c1 23to kill a flappybird
ah this was so adorable ninaa
[massington forever] I mean what I didn't say anything..
anyway, this was absolutely perfect and it was really realistic with the little kid wedding [which was oh-so cute] and ah sammy lol she's great. They probably didn't like her, but lets just take a moment to applaud her for implanting the idea of the two getting married. Okay?
/clapclap /nodnod
this was seriously amazing though, an I lovelovelove massington its just gaaah feels
and its just so cute and perfect and I love how original it is [because I don't believe I've read anything with a kid wedding...and I would probably remember if I did] so thank you for gracing us with this fabulous and perfect and adorable and perfect oneshot.
xoxo,
natalie
23to kill a flappybirdah this was so adorable ninaa
[massington forever] I mean what I didn't say anything..
anyway, this was absolutely perfect and it was really realistic with the little kid wedding [which was oh-so cute] and ah sammy lol she's great. They probably didn't like her, but lets just take a moment to applaud her for implanting the idea of the two getting married. Okay?
/clapclap /nodnod
this was seriously amazing though, an I lovelovelove massington its just gaaah feels
and its just so cute and perfect and I love how original it is [because I don't believe I've read anything with a kid wedding...and I would probably remember if I did] so thank you for gracing us with this fabulous and perfect and adorable and perfect oneshot.
xoxo,
natalie
9/8/2013 c1 15harper price
...did i ever tell you that i had a fake wedding in seventh grade? anyway, this was so fluffy and you used the prompts really well and asdfghjkl; the massington feels. the wedding when they were six is just too cute. your writing style is perfect and the sentences are short and sweet and everything's simple but beautiful. that's what all your one-shots are like, i don't even know how you do it. i spend forever on most of my one-shots polishing them and you rush through this and it turns out perfect. i can't even. the characterization was so well done and everything in this fic is just perfect, perfect, & perfect. you're perfect. i love child weddings and i kinda had another one when i was seven lol (don't call me a cheater we never actually went through with it) but it's the cutest thing ever. i love the different time periods thing because we can compare; you wrote the comparisons and differences between when they were six and when they were twenty-two reallyreallyreally well.
[wearing his father's clothes and why his best friend is holding two licorice rings and his mother's lacy cushion.] okay this is the cutest thing ever! /squeals [because he's pretty sure infiniteeee is not the way you spell infinity.] and this. :) [Both rings are gone within four hours but the feelings stay.] okie this was just too cute. [This time the rings will stay, a reminder of their pure, simple, magical love.] and then this ending, how it connects to the previous part. i think this was really similar to rainbow hearts with the different time periods and all but i love it when you write stories like these.
no sp&g errors. at all. how do you do it? this is the most perfect thing i've ever read and i'd be stupid NOT to favorite it. anyone would be stupid not to favorite it. siriusly nina stop putting yourself down because you're one of the best authors i know.
xx rachel
15harper price...did i ever tell you that i had a fake wedding in seventh grade? anyway, this was so fluffy and you used the prompts really well and asdfghjkl; the massington feels. the wedding when they were six is just too cute. your writing style is perfect and the sentences are short and sweet and everything's simple but beautiful. that's what all your one-shots are like, i don't even know how you do it. i spend forever on most of my one-shots polishing them and you rush through this and it turns out perfect. i can't even. the characterization was so well done and everything in this fic is just perfect, perfect, & perfect. you're perfect. i love child weddings and i kinda had another one when i was seven lol (don't call me a cheater we never actually went through with it) but it's the cutest thing ever. i love the different time periods thing because we can compare; you wrote the comparisons and differences between when they were six and when they were twenty-two reallyreallyreally well.
[wearing his father's clothes and why his best friend is holding two licorice rings and his mother's lacy cushion.] okay this is the cutest thing ever! /squeals [because he's pretty sure infiniteeee is not the way you spell infinity.] and this. :) [Both rings are gone within four hours but the feelings stay.] okie this was just too cute. [This time the rings will stay, a reminder of their pure, simple, magical love.] and then this ending, how it connects to the previous part. i think this was really similar to rainbow hearts with the different time periods and all but i love it when you write stories like these.
no sp&g errors. at all. how do you do it? this is the most perfect thing i've ever read and i'd be stupid NOT to favorite it. anyone would be stupid not to favorite it. siriusly nina stop putting yourself down because you're one of the best authors i know.
xx rachel