
6/13/2016 c17 Guest
accurate description of exam week
accurate description of exam week
4/20/2016 c6 pencilpower
The feels of one 3 Great job. Adam is my second favorite character (next to 8) so it's great to see a story in his point of view. I only have his lost files, now this. Thanks for that q:
The feels of one 3 Great job. Adam is my second favorite character (next to 8) so it's great to see a story in his point of view. I only have his lost files, now this. Thanks for that q:
3/22/2016 c28 I.wish.I.could.be.Number.Five
I was so happy that you had updated! Love this chapter and can’t wait for more!
I was so happy that you had updated! Love this chapter and can’t wait for more!
8/4/2015 c5
3TheAdventuresofaNerd
Your metaphor used to describe Marina as "dead" and then "living" was very powerful. Also the way you showed her behavior and reaction to this all was very good. I quite enjoyed this one!

Your metaphor used to describe Marina as "dead" and then "living" was very powerful. Also the way you showed her behavior and reaction to this all was very good. I quite enjoyed this one!
8/4/2015 c2 TheAdventuresofaNerd
This is a very good chapter. The way you described Marina's feelings was very poetic but still made the emotions clear. Good job on this :)
This is a very good chapter. The way you described Marina's feelings was very poetic but still made the emotions clear. Good job on this :)