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8/21/2015 c1 justyourtypicalathlete
I so ship it
8/21/2015 c1 1jasmine.n.underwood
Please continue this interesting story can't wait to see what happens next :P:P:):):D
8/8/2014 c5 abby
I love it please continue
7/19/2014 c4 Ravenmore45
This story sucks. Fucking retard.
9/19/2013 c5 Guest
please write more
9/19/2013 c5 2Don't-Heichou-Me-Brat
hello! I've read through your story and would love to offer my assistance as a beta reader! message me if you wanna know more!
9/12/2013 c3 Matthy
Im sorry but I cannot keep on are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes and my eyes and braint dont want to work more if this means all the chapters are going to be writen like !
9/13/2013 c5 Ravenmore45
Please don't make Emily a damsel in distress! I hate that! It's so cliche!
9/13/2013 c4 2Mortalsapien
Nice new chapter..
I liked but ,I think it was little OOC for Bruce to say that to Emily ,that she owe him..

But its not Bruce/Batman to ask returns in his help.. ... At least I always thought that .

Keep Writing...
9/12/2013 c5 highlander348
She almost kissed Batman! It's not fair! :(
9/12/2013 c3 Mortalsapien
Nice start ! of story..my frnd...
specificly Emiy and Bruce first meeting was quite unique in Cementry... nice..

Bruce offering Emily space in Manor was good move... to keep her safe and since Emily does'nt have family...

But I would suggest strongly that do not make Emily and Bruce fall for each other too fast... Its not too good for their relationship...
(Take things little slow and let them grow habitual of their company...)
Then they could love each other ...

However, I think unmasking Batman now...is not correct time for it.. Bruce/Emily does'nt even know each other fully...
It would be too soon...

May be later in time as Emily already suspecting...She will discover it by her own..

Keep writing..
9/11/2013 c3 WinterRain36
when emily finally unmasks batman can she help him? pretty please!
9/11/2013 c3 highlander348
Bruce will have a hard time sneaking out at night with Emily there! (laughing)

I hope she helps Batman though. That crime lord is probably after Batman to. Who will watch over him?
9/10/2013 c2 highlander348
Can she still unmask Batman soon? Please? :)
9/10/2013 c1 highlander348
A good start! Just some spelling errors here and there. I wonder what Emily will see throught her telescope? Here is a suggestion for you which I hope you like! Could she see Batman taking off his mask? She could then blackmail him into letting her help him! Batman won't like it but he won't have much of a choice now. (lol) What do you think? :)

Cheers!

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