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11/4/2013 c1 29Edhla
Very nice little tale :-) Because it's told in first person, some of the pronouns got a bit intrusive (I, my, etc), and I'm wondering about both the last line (did you misplace punctuation marks?) and rating (simply for use of the word "slut") but I really like these characters and it was really refreshing to see a MR fic not centered around Christian. Nice work x

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