
7/25/2022 c1 Guest
It's 2022 and i will say that thus is kiss chef for me and the story too
It's 2022 and i will say that thus is kiss chef for me and the story too
8/19/2018 c1 Stepheney
You didn't write the second punishment Harry needed to receive so it can't be finished yet
You didn't write the second punishment Harry needed to receive so it can't be finished yet
2/20/2015 c1
52Firediva0
You are amazing! I love your writing style! You just have that intelligent,yet in character way of speech, and it astounds me. This was an amazing oneshot,and I totally look forward to any more writing you do. I can totally see this with the main story(Although I don't think I reviewed yet.). Oh yeah if I didn't review, this also covers that.
Your writing is so sophisticated, and shows a whole other side to Tom and Harry's relationship.
You are truly an awesome writer, and I look forward to reading more from you.

You are amazing! I love your writing style! You just have that intelligent,yet in character way of speech, and it astounds me. This was an amazing oneshot,and I totally look forward to any more writing you do. I can totally see this with the main story(Although I don't think I reviewed yet.). Oh yeah if I didn't review, this also covers that.
Your writing is so sophisticated, and shows a whole other side to Tom and Harry's relationship.
You are truly an awesome writer, and I look forward to reading more from you.
1/3/2015 c1 cztelnik
This has quite the potential for many scenes- magic is so awesome it allows for such a lot of activities implausible in the 'muggle' world. Dark pleasure indeed.
This has quite the potential for many scenes- magic is so awesome it allows for such a lot of activities implausible in the 'muggle' world. Dark pleasure indeed.
12/3/2014 c1
5DearlyFictitious
I can usually read stuff like this with a very straight face; but when it comes to these two in particular from FF...I feel as though I walked in on something very private!
Kudos to you, I don't blush very often!

I can usually read stuff like this with a very straight face; but when it comes to these two in particular from FF...I feel as though I walked in on something very private!
Kudos to you, I don't blush very often!
2/3/2014 c1
1GothicDebby
mmm.. lots of love?
I mean. lots of it?
Loved this, love your writing ;)
lately I'm very out of the FF word because I'm crazy busy at work, but I wanted to stop and tell you you are an amazing writer, and I'm still reading everything!
aaandd... THIS IS JUST AWESOME :D

mmm.. lots of love?
I mean. lots of it?
Loved this, love your writing ;)
lately I'm very out of the FF word because I'm crazy busy at work, but I wanted to stop and tell you you are an amazing writer, and I'm still reading everything!
aaandd... THIS IS JUST AWESOME :D
12/16/2013 c1 Tommy14
Love seeing Tom so possessive and controlling of Harry. Of coarse Harry doesn't seem to have a problem with it and encourages him. Madame Delacour will shortly be in a world of discomfort. Very nice out take.
Love seeing Tom so possessive and controlling of Harry. Of coarse Harry doesn't seem to have a problem with it and encourages him. Madame Delacour will shortly be in a world of discomfort. Very nice out take.
9/16/2013 c1 admin.fanfic
So I read the story immediately... That was awesome. Your PWP was intelligent, I like Tom ad Harry the way you describe them. They are so funny together and they fit so well. I also like your style so that gives me the envy to read more from you. I really like the final line. I wish I was in Harry's place... Do you take the beginning of the title from Sherlock Holmes? Just one thing to say: maybe there is too much italics, you should probably indicates the flash back in a different way but that's just a technical point. Despite it, everything was perfect.
So I read the story immediately... That was awesome. Your PWP was intelligent, I like Tom ad Harry the way you describe them. They are so funny together and they fit so well. I also like your style so that gives me the envy to read more from you. I really like the final line. I wish I was in Harry's place... Do you take the beginning of the title from Sherlock Holmes? Just one thing to say: maybe there is too much italics, you should probably indicates the flash back in a different way but that's just a technical point. Despite it, everything was perfect.
9/16/2013 c1
19LeontinaStardust
Oh. Wow.
This was hot :D The bondage and the roughness and the falling asleep still connected. These are things I like ;)
If you decide to write more PWPs, I won't complain LOL
I am also excited to hear that you have written more than half of the next chapter of TFCNW :D

Oh. Wow.
This was hot :D The bondage and the roughness and the falling asleep still connected. These are things I like ;)
If you decide to write more PWPs, I won't complain LOL
I am also excited to hear that you have written more than half of the next chapter of TFCNW :D
9/14/2013 c1 jay
awesome!
i can so see that as their future.
awesome!
i can so see that as their future.
9/13/2013 c1
45Paimpont
Wowwwww! That was a beautifully written story, Krysania! Bondage is not really my thing, but I can be open-minded when Tom is wearing that red shirt :-) Very hot!

Wowwwww! That was a beautifully written story, Krysania! Bondage is not really my thing, but I can be open-minded when Tom is wearing that red shirt :-) Very hot!
9/13/2013 c1 Avid
Fantastic piece. I dearly wish this becomes canon in the far future of your work. It certainly portrays the dynamic of Tom and Harry perfectly.
I hope you're inspired to continue writing "Fate Changed, Now What?", I am one of your many fans and enthusiastically cheer you on! :)
Fantastic piece. I dearly wish this becomes canon in the far future of your work. It certainly portrays the dynamic of Tom and Harry perfectly.
I hope you're inspired to continue writing "Fate Changed, Now What?", I am one of your many fans and enthusiastically cheer you on! :)
9/12/2013 c1
1coco-nut90
Oh Wow. X-rated, aren't we? XP Good job with the ahem, ahem -/-
So this is u been doing, hm? Finish the new chp soon!

Oh Wow. X-rated, aren't we? XP Good job with the ahem, ahem -/-
So this is u been doing, hm? Finish the new chp soon!