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3/23/2014 c7 1PatchsFallenAngel
It was very courageous of you to write this story. I do not condone cheating, nor am a saying that this was a pleasant story to read. It was a heartbreaking story, but it was very raw and full of real emotion.
I am not passing judgement on you. I would just like to congratulate you on speaking up about your experiences and putting that into such fantasic words, especially when most of the people on this site are likely to condemn you for such a story. Everything happens for a reason and it sounds like you and your partner have come to terms with your past grievences. I hope the both of you all the best in future.
xxPatchs
3/5/2014 c7 46Cris.P.C
Oh, Aoi, dear, I'm so sorry something like this happened to you and your fiancé. :'( I think of infidelity as something horrible that should never, ever happen, but I understand that when people are in deep, unbearable pain, they can do things that they wouldn't need to do if they were fine. I won't judge or condemn you, dear. I can understand you, this story helped me to do it. I loved the happy ending. :) The fact they (all of them) could find relief and forgiveness is wonderful. And I'm glad Emmett wanted to keep the baby (abortion is a very delicate issue to me, it affects me deeply, although I have never experienced it. Maybe it's because I can't stand it when babies die. Maybe that's one of the reasons why I also love Esme, you know). It gives me hope. I love your happy endings, you know. n.n And I think you're incredible and very brave, sharing something so personal with us all.

Oh, dear, incest? OMG. O.O Well, I'm not sure if I want to read that. XD I mean, infidelity is a thing, but incest... Well, I don't think I can enjoy that, much less if it includes Carlesme. I couldn't simply bear it if they were unfaithful to each other (well, unless they forgive each other in the end, maybe...). It makes me so sad, you know (although actually I wrote a fic about it, I'm masochistic I guess. When I translate it into English I'd love you to be my beta again, BTW n.n).
However, I hope this doesn't discourage you from writing it. Whatever you write, I'll never want you to stop doing it, big sis. ;)
3/4/2014 c7 1morena.davidson.3
I try to review every story I read so here I am. I understand the pain that comes from infidelity and am grateful for the gift of forgiveness that I received. That being said.. I don't really like the ending of this story. I acknowledge that life is messy, and that when it comes down to it you have to do what you feel is best, but I don't like the fact that they have Edward's biological daughter and he has no knowledge of her. I don't think they needed her for their new start. Glad you finished this and I can see you fulfilling your goal of being published someday. Thanks for sharing.
3/3/2014 c7 mela
How could Emmett and Rosalie ever look past the fact that he let three men RAPE her?! No matter how hurt he was, that was evil and wrong. She never deserved that. She has to live with those memories forever and he has that in his conscience forever.
3/3/2014 c7 memelovessomeemmett
Please let your next story be emmett and bella
10/5/2013 c6 Vampychick12
Please review! This story is amazing!
9/30/2013 c6 nofcksgiven
Another well written chapter.
Why did Rosalie cheat again?! Emmett's been so good to her. So frustrating.
I can't wait to read the last two chapters, tho I'm not really looking forward to Chap. 8 with the bad ending. But I will read it anyway because I think that chapter will be the more realistic one.
9/30/2013 c6 Guest
Love it review soon please xxx
9/30/2013 c6 46Cris.P.C
Oh, dear. Such a beautiful love story behind the tragedy. I wonder why people who have everything are the one who never know and appreciate it until they lose it. Rosalie had everything and she threw it away... Why? It must be a inseparable part of human being...
9/26/2013 c5 nofcksgiven
"I didn't even dare call my lover." My blood boils at that. STUPID ROSE! Why are you even thinking about that bastard?! This is just too heartbreaking. I'm angry one minute and near tears the next. She's turned him into a monster.

I'm anxious to see what's next for these two. And to see if Rose find that ridiculous thing that Emmett couldn't give her, leading her to Edward.

Thanks for another wonderful (your writing, not the situation) chapter. Looking forward to the next
9/26/2013 c5 Cris.P.C
Oh, dear God... I guess she still loves him, otherwise she would run away and divorce him. I wonder when he will be satisfied. I'm afraid of knowing the answer but now I'm here, I must know... You can't leave this story here, my dear. Continue, please. I'll stay till the end.
9/26/2013 c4 Cris.P.C
Dear God, this was too much... Lord, I must confess I didn't read the whole rape scene, I couldn't... But how can Emmett be satisfied with this? He wants her to have more lovers? Seriously? Wasn't he terribly upset exactly because of that? He wants her to suffer, I suppose. Anything else wouldn't make any sense. I feel so sorry for Rosale. OK, she's an adulterer, but now he is too, and I don't think she deserves such thing as being raped by three strangers. Last chapter Emmett wasn't better than her, but now he's worse, I think.
9/26/2013 c5 1Grace brings Hope
I love the emotional rawness that you portray. You can literally feel both of their hearts breaking. Can't wait for the next update!
9/26/2013 c5 2crematlv19
is saddddddd,,, rose y emmett deben perdonarseeeeeeeeeeeee
9/25/2013 c4 vaness
please ...I respect your story, but I think that you must give another ending, not so dramatic, even not so sad because I donn't look EMMETT like the bad man
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