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1/16/2020 c10 16Child of Dreams
I thought that Gimli was already taken...
9/19/2019 c7 11Sage Nicholson
So, this is an interesting premise, it really is. I've seen a lot of fanfiction universities, but none where its such a massive fandom combo. That's cool. However, your OC Rory... well, she's a Sue.

First of all, there's no reason why she should even be at this fanfic academy. These places are for bad writers only, but you go out of your way to show that Rory isn't a bad writer. As such, there's no reason why she should be here.

Second of all, she is "different" and "special" because she doesn't openly lust after canon characters. She has an air of superiority about her, looking down at all the other fangirls. All the other girls are treated as one note perverts who's only purpose in life to chase lust objects. None of them get any other character developement.

Third: And because of how "special" she is, she apparently becomes the object of a bet between all the canon characters, to try and seduce her. This is creepy and out of character; you'd think people like Captain America, Batman and Legolas would have more respect and dignity than this.

And fourth, she actually does get a canon character to fall in love with her in a matter of days, not because of some stupid bet.

In conclusion, Rory needs a lot of work before she can be a well-rounded, realistic character.
10/13/2018 c1 16Child of Dreams
Don't worry, Rory, I don't fangirl either...
Still don't understand why people do that...
2/5/2017 c1 Guest
Are you ever going to finish this? ~ I been following on LOTRFanfiction since ep 20...
3/17/2016 c3 1DarkPlague689
I feel so out of place am I the only dude on this website.
2/26/2016 c21 Jaxjax
I like this story! I hope you get a chance to update soon, I want to know what you are going to do with Rory and Boromir!
2/2/2016 c21 Flight of the Ow
You do realize that Rory IS a Mary-Sue, right? I mean, the "special sassy snowflake" who's beautiful, kind, different and more original than everyone else and everyone falls in love with her is one of the most cliché plots of all time, I'm sorry. If you totally did this on purpose to prove your point, then kudos to you, amazing job with the concept, but otherwise I'm sorry, Rory isn't much better than the characters you make fun of.
12/29/2015 c19 Guest
Please post more please I'm laughing so fucking hard right now
8/19/2015 c13 2RandomFandoms14
MOAR Glorfy and Michal please!
8/19/2015 c12 RandomFandoms14
Voldemort's in on it! Hahahahahahaha! I die.
8/18/2015 c13 7SaphiralovesTolkien
Only Gandalf
LOVED the fireworks!
5/17/2015 c11 SaphiralovesTolkien
talking spiders...I think I might have just found my new favorite character...
lol!
I do really enjoy this story simply because it is so hilarious and that there are a lot of characters and fandoms in it...
write more soon!
8/16/2014 c9 Saphira
SO SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING! I AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU UPDATED! I SERIOUSLY FREAKIN LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE, PLEASE WRITE MORE!
HILARIOUS!11
Namarie!1
8/12/2014 c8 Inactive Account I
Something's not right with this chapter, it's all in code. p dir"ltr" style"line-height:1.15;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"span style"font-size:16px;font-family:'Times New Roman';color:#000000;background-color:transparent;font-weight:normal;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;" isn't any kind of English I can understand. Could you please change/fix it?
8/12/2014 c8 kookiecraft
Small problem on chapter eight...
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