
7/31/2015 c2
6SuperWhoAvengeLock Trash
I really like this story. So therefor I will help hunt down that inspiration. *grabs backpack* onward my trusty steed. *forces happy to fly after inspiration*

I really like this story. So therefor I will help hunt down that inspiration. *grabs backpack* onward my trusty steed. *forces happy to fly after inspiration*
10/20/2013 c2
1MonkeyShinigami
Really great chapter. The fighting scenes were well done. And the conversations between Michael and Pyrikon are very funny. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Really great chapter. The fighting scenes were well done. And the conversations between Michael and Pyrikon are very funny. Can't wait for the next chapter.
9/17/2013 c1 MonkeyShinigami
Good story so far. I see a potential great story. As for (hopefully) constructive criticism, work a bit on your grammer. But as far as story goes, it looks great. Writing a fanfiction is tough business, which is why I haven't written one.
Good story so far. I see a potential great story. As for (hopefully) constructive criticism, work a bit on your grammer. But as far as story goes, it looks great. Writing a fanfiction is tough business, which is why I haven't written one.