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5/17 c42 unexpectedsnag
thank you for writing! surprised it took me so long to find this! it has a lot of what I like in a ficexperienced Bella (although I didnt love how edwards number was still higher in 18 mths vs 6 yrspining head over heels Eddie
- OM drama
- conflict from misunderstanding and not actual malice/cheating/bad decision
- good grovel (the imagery of him waiting at the airport for her and her not showing was heartbreakingly perfect)

I wish Bella was a little more confident in her experience and less ashamed of it (sex positive 2022 over here) but I understand her hurt from when she was younger
7/14/2021 c42 1Escapee2FF
great story !
3/23/2021 c1 Lyndseyxx
Great story, really enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing
9/2/2020 c42 13Elle Whitecap
This is a very sweet story with the right amount of angst. Good job.
12/16/2019 c34 quisha1991
It’s her grandmother’s locket
12/16/2019 c33 quisha1991
It’s not right to put all the blame on Edward... I don’t like it
12/16/2019 c32 quisha1991
She should of at least hear him out... she hurt him as well, he lashed out but at least he acknowledged that he was hurt... this whole time you kept saying “ we’re only friends”... poor Edward
7/21/2019 c42 boopgirl
Cute
2/28/2019 c42 sarabo
A great delivery. I'm so glad her name isn't Renesme!
2/28/2019 c40 sarabo
This was a beautiful, amazing story, angst or not. I still can't believe that English is not your first language. Your vernacular was spot on . Thanks again and take care until the next one pops up on my computer.
2/28/2019 c39 sarabo
A very beautiful wedding. I especially liked the red roses ans white calla lilies.
Of course, Bella is pregnant. They will be an amazing family!
2/27/2019 c37 sarabo
Sorry that it's over (the main story), but now the epilogue.
2/27/2019 c36 sarabo
A very cheerful reunion.
2/27/2019 c34 sarabo
Such a sad Christmas! I'm sure Edward's was the same.
2/27/2019 c33 sarabo
I'm so sorry that the trolls are giving you a difficult time. They are afraid to use their name because they may get some deserved blow back, so they always post as guests. I can understand why some authors are changing sites and don't wish to continue with FF. SO SAD!
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