
4/22/2024 c1 debb lavoie
I love it. You wrote her pain very well. I am guessing he found aother girl.
I love it. You wrote her pain very well. I am guessing he found aother girl.
10/9/2023 c42 Bevey99
Well thought out plot. Great progression of their relationship, even the bad parts. Really enjoyed the whole way. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Well thought out plot. Great progression of their relationship, even the bad parts. Really enjoyed the whole way. Thanks for writing and sharing.
5/17/2022 c42 unexpectedsnag
thank you for writing! surprised it took me so long to find this! it has a lot of what I like in a ficexperienced Bella (although I didnt love how edwards number was still higher in 18 mths vs 6 yrspining head over heels Eddie
- OM drama
- conflict from misunderstanding and not actual malice/cheating/bad decision
- good grovel (the imagery of him waiting at the airport for her and her not showing was heartbreakingly perfect)
I wish Bella was a little more confident in her experience and less ashamed of it (sex positive 2022 over here) but I understand her hurt from when she was younger
thank you for writing! surprised it took me so long to find this! it has a lot of what I like in a ficexperienced Bella (although I didnt love how edwards number was still higher in 18 mths vs 6 yrspining head over heels Eddie
- OM drama
- conflict from misunderstanding and not actual malice/cheating/bad decision
- good grovel (the imagery of him waiting at the airport for her and her not showing was heartbreakingly perfect)
I wish Bella was a little more confident in her experience and less ashamed of it (sex positive 2022 over here) but I understand her hurt from when she was younger
12/16/2019 c32 quisha1991
She should of at least hear him out... she hurt him as well, he lashed out but at least he acknowledged that he was hurt... this whole time you kept saying “ we’re only friends”... poor Edward
She should of at least hear him out... she hurt him as well, he lashed out but at least he acknowledged that he was hurt... this whole time you kept saying “ we’re only friends”... poor Edward