for Puzzle of my Heart2/23/2019 c17 sarabo
Emmett is always so full of piss and vinegar. No telling what will come out of his mouth next.
Emmett is always so full of piss and vinegar. No telling what will come out of his mouth next.
2/22/2019 c14 sarabo
Believe it or not, when I was a kid I went to the Seattle world's fair. It was great, but I didn't see Elvis there, ha ha. Edward is just perfect. Not only a great lover but a wonderful nurse also.
Believe it or not, when I was a kid I went to the Seattle world's fair. It was great, but I didn't see Elvis there, ha ha. Edward is just perfect. Not only a great lover but a wonderful nurse also.
2/22/2019 c13 sarabo
He is really great the next morning! Wish Bella would let her fears go and enjoy the mornings too.
He is really great the next morning! Wish Bella would let her fears go and enjoy the mornings too.
2/22/2019 c10 sarabo
Bella really was hurt by the jerk. I don't blame her for being upset, but all men are not alike. I hope she soon will let him in and for them to be exclusive.
Bella really was hurt by the jerk. I don't blame her for being upset, but all men are not alike. I hope she soon will let him in and for them to be exclusive.
2/22/2019 c9 sarabo
I do want to slap Bella! Most stories make her out to be a quiet little mouse. You have given her depth of character.
I do want to slap Bella! Most stories make her out to be a quiet little mouse. You have given her depth of character.
2/22/2019 c5 sarabo
This is the second time I'm reading this. Their time together is amazing! I always have to look at the reviews first to see if I had reviewed the first time. I hope you continue to grace us with more stories.
This is the second time I'm reading this. Their time together is amazing! I always have to look at the reviews first to see if I had reviewed the first time. I hope you continue to grace us with more stories.
1/25/2019 c42 Sam
I loved this story! What a perfect Edward you’ve written. The pacing of the story was great and Bella’s character development felt natural. Thank you for sharing!
I loved this story! What a perfect Edward you’ve written. The pacing of the story was great and Bella’s character development felt natural. Thank you for sharing!
11/14/2018 c42 Alinny Miranda
I have to say that this is my favorite story of all times. I’ve read this story more than 10x! I truly love it and sometimes I wish we had a future take or something... So beautiful, so real. Congrats on being such an incredible writer!
I have to say that this is my favorite story of all times. I’ve read this story more than 10x! I truly love it and sometimes I wish we had a future take or something... So beautiful, so real. Congrats on being such an incredible writer!
4/15/2018 c42 Guest
With this story I finished to read all your stories from your profile. Everyone was different but all were amazing. I can't decide which is my favorite.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQuez
With this story I finished to read all your stories from your profile. Everyone was different but all were amazing. I can't decide which is my favorite.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQuez