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9/18/2013 c1 Guest
I am looking forward to reading more please.
9/18/2013 c1 1EdwardsFirstKiss
Sounds like Jake hurt Bella and now she has walls will be interesting to see what Effect Edward has on her.
9/17/2013 c1 Guest
Wow,
the strong capable woman...who can't let her self really feel any more. A night in New York and a dress that never got worn...
What the?
This is good
Reb
9/17/2013 c1 56MyTwiDreams
Vampgirl promoted this on facebook and I got curious...I really like the beginning of this story. Maybe Jacob cheated on Bella or something like that. Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more of this fic. Thank you for sharing
9/17/2013 c1 4Vampgirl79
Hi sweety! I just had to review this chapter even though I already read it, haa. Wow, its awesome to see this story posted live now. I am so very proud of you! I love your writing and this story so far, I truly do. I think many readers will love it as I already do! I feel like such a fail though. I haven't read chapter 3 yet but I will. Thanks for sending me the other chapters too. Trust me I want to read them but finding time to is tough. *sigh* But I will! Anyhow I was so happy to get the alert for this. The cover pic looks great. Though I have been thinking lately of making you a different one. I am picky with how that one looks, lol. But you are very welcome for the banner and cover, I was happy to make them for you! Oh and thank you for your shout out to me. *blush* That really made my day, it hasn't been a good one, so thank you! I see you already have followers and favorites, yea! I cant wait to see the reviews poor in. Anyhow, I read through the chapter agian and loved it as much as I did when I first read it. I felt so bad for Bella in this chapter. I can really feel her struggle with what shes doing by sleeping with these men and having no commitment to them. Her decision to keep her heart closed and to not want love again. Its sad. I can get why she does this and why she is this way. I already love Alice in this fic, I cant wait to read more of her! And I love fics with Charlie and Sue together ;) I enjoyed how you explain all of the back ground, how you set it all in place. And as for as Jacob goes, that is heartbreaking. Bella seemed to have loved him dearly and there was a time when they were so happy and in love. *sigh* Then it just all ended. My guess still is that he was unfaithful to her, or he just really broke her heart. poor Bella. The way you wrote when she opened the box and looked at all the memories inside was beautiful. Beautifully written girl! I loved it. Cant wait to see chapter 2 posted ;) Amazing job hun, keep it up! I am proud of you, ttys xoxoxox
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