for Becoming the Enemy3/24/2016 c16 
9thearizona
I never review mid story, but I just have to. WHAT THE F***ING F*** JUST HAPPENED!? As soon as I read val's name I put my phone down and just said no...i mean what the F***! What? How? Why?...I'm done. I'm not reading this any more. It's too twisty. Well, mainly cause everything is coming together...words are escaping me right now. I mean what the actual F*** just happened?! Ugh, I guess back to reading I go!
P.s. I'm not going to stop reading, I really like this story but sometimes it gets really frustrating.
9thearizonaI never review mid story, but I just have to. WHAT THE F***ING F*** JUST HAPPENED!? As soon as I read val's name I put my phone down and just said no...i mean what the F***! What? How? Why?...I'm done. I'm not reading this any more. It's too twisty. Well, mainly cause everything is coming together...words are escaping me right now. I mean what the actual F*** just happened?! Ugh, I guess back to reading I go!
P.s. I'm not going to stop reading, I really like this story but sometimes it gets really frustrating.
8/28/2015 c4 KindaLikeShadow
Okay... I like your idea... Hm... I already have a transformation fic in progress, but another could never hurt...
To clear up any questions, because I have had people ask me, I don't have an account because I don't have an email and my mom won't let me use hers, but I still love to write fanfics and I do so on Google Docs.
Hiccup IS a genius, and in more ways than one. It definetly would be interesting he he WERE taking lessons from Loki himself, and definetly a unique take on things from Alvin's point. If that makes any sense. My head works in wierd ways.
Okay... I like your idea... Hm... I already have a transformation fic in progress, but another could never hurt...
To clear up any questions, because I have had people ask me, I don't have an account because I don't have an email and my mom won't let me use hers, but I still love to write fanfics and I do so on Google Docs.
Hiccup IS a genius, and in more ways than one. It definetly would be interesting he he WERE taking lessons from Loki himself, and definetly a unique take on things from Alvin's point. If that makes any sense. My head works in wierd ways.
8/28/2015 c3 KindaLikeShadow
'Going off the rails on the Crazy Train!'
Yeah... That was the first thing that popped into my head when you said the fic's officially "Off the Rails." Wierd.
'Going off the rails on the Crazy Train!'
Yeah... That was the first thing that popped into my head when you said the fic's officially "Off the Rails." Wierd.
8/28/2015 c2 KindaLikeShadow
Can't put it any other way: I love this story. A lot. For a couple reasons, actually. One, the grammar and spelling and stuff like that is almost impeccable. Two, it's very creative and imaginative. Definitely, like you said, putting a twist on the classic transformation fic. Three, it's long. It's nice and long to last me a while. It's hard to find such good fanfics that last me any time at all to read, but this one does.
Astrid meeting Camicazi... I have thought about that, and what happened basically mirrors my ideas of it. It's also rather amusing, since we know they're practically the same character.
Can't put it any other way: I love this story. A lot. For a couple reasons, actually. One, the grammar and spelling and stuff like that is almost impeccable. Two, it's very creative and imaginative. Definitely, like you said, putting a twist on the classic transformation fic. Three, it's long. It's nice and long to last me a while. It's hard to find such good fanfics that last me any time at all to read, but this one does.
Astrid meeting Camicazi... I have thought about that, and what happened basically mirrors my ideas of it. It's also rather amusing, since we know they're practically the same character.
8/17/2015 c25 1bluisamazing
I just finished and let me say this is one of the best fanfictions I have read. The detail you put into this, the different story arcs and the plot twists! Will be looking out for future chapters of the sequel!
1bluisamazingI just finished and let me say this is one of the best fanfictions I have read. The detail you put into this, the different story arcs and the plot twists! Will be looking out for future chapters of the sequel!
7/12/2015 c25 Alethro
Hello,
I ( u/Plailect) am the unofficial fanfiction reviewer for the r/httyd subreddit. I read an httyd fanfiction every couple weeks and write a review to talk about my thoughts and opinions. Each post includes a link to the next thing I'm reading so people can follow along and share their thoughts and the previous posts for people unfamiliar with my posts. I am going through the process of linking old posts to the authors as feedback. These are old and may be outdated now.
You can find your post here: r/httyd/comments/2om0lw/becoming_the_enemy_fanfiction_part_6/
Thanks for your time,
~Plailect
Hello,
I ( u/Plailect) am the unofficial fanfiction reviewer for the r/httyd subreddit. I read an httyd fanfiction every couple weeks and write a review to talk about my thoughts and opinions. Each post includes a link to the next thing I'm reading so people can follow along and share their thoughts and the previous posts for people unfamiliar with my posts. I am going through the process of linking old posts to the authors as feedback. These are old and may be outdated now.
You can find your post here: r/httyd/comments/2om0lw/becoming_the_enemy_fanfiction_part_6/
Thanks for your time,
~Plailect
5/29/2015 c25 3Drunken Hamster
This was another awesome fic, very much enjoyed. Faved and followed bro.
Outty,
-Drunk
3Drunken HamsterThis was another awesome fic, very much enjoyed. Faved and followed bro.
Outty,
-Drunk
2/18/2015 c12 Basket in a Nutcase
Dang iiiiiittt, I kinda wanted Hiccup to get really hurt
Y'know what I mean
Dang iiiiiittt, I kinda wanted Hiccup to get really hurt
Y'know what I mean
12/14/2014 c12 AlexFalk
I am guessing that the kids are actually dragons and that Toothless or the Nadder was 'the fifth'. If so I can name what each dragon they are:
Red head: Monstrous Nightmare
Brown head: Gronkle
Twins: A single Zikkleback (Is that one word or two? Also what are their reactions to not sharing one body?)
I am guessing that the kids are actually dragons and that Toothless or the Nadder was 'the fifth'. If so I can name what each dragon they are:
Red head: Monstrous Nightmare
Brown head: Gronkle
Twins: A single Zikkleback (Is that one word or two? Also what are their reactions to not sharing one body?)
11/29/2014 c24 Frankie4017
i really liked this chapter and the bonus one cause i forgot to review this one then i might as well kill 2 birds with one stone so yeah i liked this one and yeah have fun and bye.
i really liked this chapter and the bonus one cause i forgot to review this one then i might as well kill 2 birds with one stone so yeah i liked this one and yeah have fun and bye.
11/29/2014 c23 Frankie4017
im not gonna stop reading this story and if i do find more time on my hands then i will most likely read this story again and yeah also i have zero questions and zero things to say about this story caus i just love it so much so yeah i hope you have had fun again and yeah bye.
im not gonna stop reading this story and if i do find more time on my hands then i will most likely read this story again and yeah also i have zero questions and zero things to say about this story caus i just love it so much so yeah i hope you have had fun again and yeah bye.
11/28/2014 c22 Frankie4017
i still love the story but im just kinda bored and this is something i turn to when i have nothing else to do other then talk to my friends on facebook and nothing to play on the xbox or computer so i turn to this story almost 50% of the time cause im just too bored to do anything else hehe oh well hae fun and bye.
i still love the story but im just kinda bored and this is something i turn to when i have nothing else to do other then talk to my friends on facebook and nothing to play on the xbox or computer so i turn to this story almost 50% of the time cause im just too bored to do anything else hehe oh well hae fun and bye.