for Becoming the Enemy
311/28/2014 c16 NezoTheNightFury
Wow near the end I saw that coming but holy shit that's a game changer
Wow near the end I saw that coming but holy shit that's a game changer
11/28/2014 c21 Frankie4017
i still cant see how i can express myself to you in words but i would do so in actions... but anyway i still love the story and i will finish it tomorrow when im not so excited to have internet back so yeah have fun and bye.
i still cant see how i can express myself to you in words but i would do so in actions... but anyway i still love the story and i will finish it tomorrow when im not so excited to have internet back so yeah have fun and bye.
11/27/2014 c15 NezoTheNightFury
Well as I would say "the shit has hit the fan" what a twist (as being I have read most of the longer Httyd fanfics I know what your talking about) but the Usurper (im guessing is the dragon term for R.E.D (retired, extremely dangerous) and by that your referencing Alvin
Well as I would say "the shit has hit the fan" what a twist (as being I have read most of the longer Httyd fanfics I know what your talking about) but the Usurper (im guessing is the dragon term for R.E.D (retired, extremely dangerous) and by that your referencing Alvin
11/26/2014 c20 Frankie4017
hey again i just wanted to say i give up on reviewing and im just gonna read the rest of the story cause i have ran out of stuff to compliments and things to say so yeah have fun and bye.
hey again i just wanted to say i give up on reviewing and im just gonna read the rest of the story cause i have ran out of stuff to compliments and things to say so yeah have fun and bye.
11/26/2014 c19 Frankie4017
i just cant stop fussing about how good this story is and yes i will read one more chapter today then go on to do some more stuff but if i dont have anything to do then i will continue reading this story ok so yeah have fun bye.
i just cant stop fussing about how good this story is and yes i will read one more chapter today then go on to do some more stuff but if i dont have anything to do then i will continue reading this story ok so yeah have fun bye.
11/26/2014 c13 NezoTheNightFury
Hm... I'm not an idiot and im pretty observant so I would say that those other teens and trader Al are dragons due to their personality's and dialog
Hm... I'm not an idiot and im pretty observant so I would say that those other teens and trader Al are dragons due to their personality's and dialog
11/25/2014 c18 Frankie4017
i just have no words to say... i am really astounded by this story and where your going with it so yeah ill just shut up before i add in something stupid so yeah have fun and bye.
i just have no words to say... i am really astounded by this story and where your going with it so yeah ill just shut up before i add in something stupid so yeah have fun and bye.
11/25/2014 c17 Frankie4017
i liked this chapter and its nice to read it and i love to see what happends next but i will retire for the rest of the day so i can go to school and yeah have fun and bye.
i liked this chapter and its nice to read it and i love to see what happends next but i will retire for the rest of the day so i can go to school and yeah have fun and bye.
11/25/2014 c16 Frankie4017
i am shocked and happy at the end Endevourer. i was thinking hard on what else to say but nothing came out so i am speechless and this story is very nice and i will continue it.
i am shocked and happy at the end Endevourer. i was thinking hard on what else to say but nothing came out so i am speechless and this story is very nice and i will continue it.
11/23/2014 c15 Frankie4017
hello Endevourer i would like to say that i like the direction that the story is going and i will maby read another chapter or two now so i can get a grip of everything and all that but i may actreally accidently activate my reading overdrive to where i do nothing but read stories so yeah expect more reviews for the later chapters so yeah i hope you had fun an bye.
hello Endevourer i would like to say that i like the direction that the story is going and i will maby read another chapter or two now so i can get a grip of everything and all that but i may actreally accidently activate my reading overdrive to where i do nothing but read stories so yeah expect more reviews for the later chapters so yeah i hope you had fun an bye.
11/23/2014 c14 Frankie4017
i really like the idea of trinkets as things for the disguises and all that and yeah all i have to say is last minute thingos cause i dont remember everything but i think it was nice for the trinkets and rings for disguises so yeah have fun and bye.
i really like the idea of trinkets as things for the disguises and all that and yeah all i have to say is last minute thingos cause i dont remember everything but i think it was nice for the trinkets and rings for disguises so yeah have fun and bye.
11/23/2014 c13 Frankie4017
haha i love where this is going and i look forward on reading the rest of it so yeah i hope youve had fun and bye.
haha i love where this is going and i look forward on reading the rest of it so yeah i hope youve had fun and bye.
11/22/2014 c12 Frankie4017
i really like where the story i going and i really want to continue and i will read maby another chapter or 2 so yeah and i really think its strange that Al knows sorcery and he was really easy going with the fact that hiccup was becoming more dragon like and all that so yeah i hope you have fun so yeah bye.
i really like where the story i going and i really want to continue and i will read maby another chapter or 2 so yeah and i really think its strange that Al knows sorcery and he was really easy going with the fact that hiccup was becoming more dragon like and all that so yeah i hope you have fun so yeah bye.
11/21/2014 c11 Frankie4017
i like it and yes im awake and i decided to read another chapter instead of trying to read 2 in one day and yeah i may not read the story completly cause when i read some chapters i was tired and i may have forgotten some of the story but once i feel like reading again and do another marathon i will mist likely turn to this to complete the story in my mind so yeah have fun and bye.
i like it and yes im awake and i decided to read another chapter instead of trying to read 2 in one day and yeah i may not read the story completly cause when i read some chapters i was tired and i may have forgotten some of the story but once i feel like reading again and do another marathon i will mist likely turn to this to complete the story in my mind so yeah have fun and bye.