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8/13/2016 c4 Jimmy Neutron
This is one of my most favorite fics in the attack on titan archive. Its fluffy and humorous and contrasts so much with the normal world of attack on titan. Good job. Its a shame that its not updating anymore
12/21/2014 c4 elriofinn96
Continue this pls
7/1/2014 c4 Akashi Seiko-chan
Lol. This story is ... Wow, just wow
11/27/2013 c4 ReadingBookGirl
Good luck with school stuff and great ending this story is very different and new. I like it a lot update when you can.
11/25/2013 c4 Guest
DUDEEEEEEE! WHAT! LEVI'S THERE TOO! Ohmygosh this is an amazing fic XD. Update plwease. Lol that was the biggest troll moment in fic history when u had the dream inside the dream! Hahaha
11/24/2013 c4 tsukuneXmoka
this is getting deep please update again soon
11/24/2013 c4 1cookie-club
I must say i really like your story, but I get confused often. Just work to make it clear in the beginning what you want to say and then add detail to it. In the beginning of the chapter the chapter where Eren was thinking about the movie he watched with Mikasa I would have writing it in the beginning you had me sacred that I missed something important.
but other than that I like it and even though I don't like yandare you got me hooked
11/23/2013 c4 efradssdasdag
I'm seriously confused after the "Doing something unexpected" part? Could you explain what happened? The ending however has got me going WTFTWFTFBAJH.
10/28/2013 c3 mr.read7
This is great! I can't wait for more!
10/20/2013 c3 Gureshingure
love it! Update! XD
10/19/2013 c3 tsukuneXmoka
be careful eren for you tread a path lined with a potential yandere
great story keep up the amazing work cant wait for the next chapter also i think you may want to consider pacing it a bit slower as the transitioning is hard to follow if you'd like i could beta it for you
10/18/2013 c3 2neterlan
Yay! Another chapter.
Love the imagine spot as usual.
Also Annie-Madness is awesome.

Time for the errors I found this time.

"Carlahad stopped in front of their house"

I had no idea that Carla was Middle-Eastern.

'This', he thought 'is going to take a while.'

The comma ',' should be before the apostrophe, not after. Also there should be a comma after 'thought.'

"Ah! Mrs. Jaeger. How nice to see you again, squeaked Annie. Her voice had broken through the dark aura which was emanating from Carla, immediately snapping her out of her reverie."

The quotation marks should close after Annie says 'again' unless Annie likes narrating her life at random times.

Keep writing.
10/18/2013 c3 nyu32
plis continue
10/18/2013 c3 efradssdasdag
This is too good... albeit ooc (obviously :P). I'm curious whether this will devolve into a EreMika or a AnniexEren, I'm good either way, though I'm leaning towards EreMika *OTP* with Annie being the close second *guilty pleasure*. I'm just going to give my prediction for what is going to bring Eren back to his universe if he ever does. Annie is going to do something super crazy, involving Eren's mom. I assume that since in this universe every major constant like Mikasa's parents death, Eren saving her, she moving in with them has taken place, Eren's mom is going to die somewhere down the line which will somehow zap him back to his universe. Just my take. MAKE MORE!
10/16/2013 c2 efradssdasdag
More... I need to know more... please write more...
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