Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for The Future Mrs McAvoy and the Director of Morale

1/13/2014 c1 10Megeen
It's been a while since you wrote this but I just stumbled across this and wanted to say that I love this story. Thank you for writing it.
1/5/2014 c1 quixoticdream
Just wanted to say - I have read this sooooo many times, I love it so much! Just beautiful... so well written, and a perfect little slice of post-proposal life - I wish there were more like this. I know I'm going to come back to it time and time again. Fab job.
9/27/2013 c1 14lilacmermaid33
Beautiful job, my friend!

I love when they take a moment to really think about how they expected tonight to end, and it wasn't anything like this. I like that Mac's question about saying no didn't freak Will out and make him second-guess her/himself, because I think on almost any other night it probably would have. I like how easy they are with showing their happiness and affection in front of others. LOVE the "I know you do" line!

Hoping to talk to you soon!
9/20/2013 c1 Guest
I LOVED THIS!
9/20/2013 c1 7Misbehavin
This was lovely. Liked the observations and placement of the newsroom team, particularly Charlie and the Lansings and their game faces. Adored the cat calls and wolf whistles and Mac's retort along with Will's smug "I know you do" and his recognition of how much more meaningful their present is because of what they experienced to get to this point.
9/20/2013 c1 Guest
That was a beautiful fic! I can actually see Will suggesting that they get married soon (and intense researches on the subject after having watched the episode told me that in NY, you only have to wait 24 hours after the license is issued), but yeah, Mac's father might want to kill him. Or demand another ceremony. ;) It was a great addition to the finale!
9/19/2013 c1 6mebfeath
Ugh. That was great. Loved it!

I'd love to see what would have happened if she'd said no, for whatever reason - and after the way he'd treated her, I think she had every right to *not* hand her heart over to him. Hmm!

Thanks for writing. Feel free to post more!
9/19/2013 c1 Guest
Love this one, Ash! I like reading the "what happens next" that we didn't get to see on screen - I think you nailed this one!
9/19/2013 c1 Guest
Ooohhh you got me in my fluff space
9/19/2013 c1 Guest
Awwwww,,,,, this IS PERFECT :) wish Sorkin would have given us some more kissing towards the end... but HEY, who am I to complain about this brilliant season finale :D ?
9/19/2013 c1 Guest
oh - look a new piece from you... :) YAY!

"His future wife. Mackenzie McHale: his future wife! It was almost beyond belief" - it still is a bit beyond belief with me too - I keep thinking something's gonna happen like Mac is having a dream or something! lol...

"I love you too Will." - see I'm so glad you added this... I said in a review to another story earlier that the lack of an "I Love you" from Mac was the ONLY thing missing from that perfect scene the other night - she could have so easily have slipped it in after her final "Yes"... *SIGH*... Anyway - I'm loving that you found space for it in here... :)

Awwww - lovely matey - really did enjoy this... Fluffy with a tiny bit of Mackenzie worry in there too...

Great job - as always! Thanks so much for posting...

xx
9/19/2013 c1 19im.just.better.fictionally
What can I say other than what an excellent story...

No I'm joking, I promise to say more. It was VERY excellent. I love the title as well. Which might sound like a weird compliment but I don't care. I'm giving it to you. Also when he asked what would he have done if she hadn't said yes and then you were like 'he never saw the smile' I actually thought she was going to slap him but really it was kiss and that was much better!

Good job buddy! Xxx
9/19/2013 c1 18awesomesausome
This is wonderful! I, much like Will, am very happy that she did not say no.

Great job!
9/19/2013 c1 myragumm
so good! love it!
9/19/2013 c1 Cloe83
Ohhhhhh I love this so much! This is exactly how I picture the rest of the night going, well, until they get out of there of course. :)
I'm having a blast reading all these stories were Will and Mackenzie are together and kissing and being silly in love and all I'm thinking is: yes, this is canon! It's not just fanfiction anymore, it really happened and we can enjoy every second of it! This is the best feeling ever.

Who know what Will would have done if Mackenzie had tried to take time before answering. I'm so glad we don't have to wonder because she was more than happy to say yes right away. :D
Also, I can't decide if they should have a big wedding or a nice, private one away from home. I guess they would want the staff around so big wedding it is!

["You have no idea what I'm going to do to you when we get home."]

Ohhh, this is material for another story I guess. ;)

Thanks for writing, looking forward to more from you soon. :)

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service