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9/5/2014 c1 Guest
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
3/14/2014 c1 Guest
this STINKS
9/22/2013 c1 1openerror
Nice piece of humorous writing here :) It'd be nice to see a few more chapters like this one. Perhaps you can do one for the krogan/turian alliance on Palaven, or the allied assault on Earth?
9/20/2013 c1 4Patient131071
Not bad for a first attempt; really quite funny. I particularly liked the replacement of curses with the word 'redacted'...

In future, you may want a beta or someone to proofread your work, since there are a couple of typos and missing words, which can disrupt a fic's flow, but it was tolerable here.

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