for Animal10/8/2013 c1 Guest
You need a beta. Like, seriously.
Anyways, cool fic!
You need a beta. Like, seriously.
Anyways, cool fic!
9/21/2013 c1 
4Camerican who
Oh my god this is hot now I to explain to my mom how I got a nosebleed out of no where. Plus OMG write some more. *covers nose with tissues*
4Camerican whoOh my god this is hot now I to explain to my mom how I got a nosebleed out of no where. Plus OMG write some more. *covers nose with tissues*
9/21/2013 c1 Messy-Haired Writer
I loved it! It was just a little hard to read. Try to not randomly break your paragraphs.
I loved it! It was just a little hard to read. Try to not randomly break your paragraphs.