for Monster1/21 c1 Mitsuki Katagiri
Howdy,
I was just scrolling through fan fiction and checking out stories when I came across this on Monster. I read the whole thing, and I absolutely loved the plot it really caught my attention! Since I'm a commission-based artist, I thought about how amazing and exciting it would be to convert this into a comic. I was genuinely impressed by how well crafted the story is. We can discuss pricing and panels in a page there. So following are my social media you can message me through it. Here are my links:
Discord: hanavic1
Twitter: FollowerGato
Howdy,
I was just scrolling through fan fiction and checking out stories when I came across this on Monster. I read the whole thing, and I absolutely loved the plot it really caught my attention! Since I'm a commission-based artist, I thought about how amazing and exciting it would be to convert this into a comic. I was genuinely impressed by how well crafted the story is. We can discuss pricing and panels in a page there. So following are my social media you can message me through it. Here are my links:
Discord: hanavic1
Twitter: FollowerGato
12/12/2022 c1 Guest
Margali Szardos Amanda Sefton (Scarlet Witch Storm and Agatha Harkness are Earth's High Priestess together
Margali Szardos Amanda Sefton (Scarlet Witch Storm and Agatha Harkness are Earth's High Priestess together
6/18/2019 c6 
2green899074
Lol I’m glad you finally specified what the frat did to her, my dark ass mind was going to a way worse place. Next stop, wtf happened with Dazzler.
2green899074Lol I’m glad you finally specified what the frat did to her, my dark ass mind was going to a way worse place. Next stop, wtf happened with Dazzler.
5/13/2018 c6 3Ryuno chu
My heart aches with every thought going through Kurt's head. That boy needs some love.
Damn! I want to know more about this Sigma Alpha Pi! There seems to be more there than just being dumb jocks.
I am absolutely thrilled that you have gotten back to writing! This was a lovely chapter and I can't wait until Marietta and Kurt's inevitable confrontation.
3Ryuno chuMy heart aches with every thought going through Kurt's head. That boy needs some love.
Damn! I want to know more about this Sigma Alpha Pi! There seems to be more there than just being dumb jocks.
I am absolutely thrilled that you have gotten back to writing! This was a lovely chapter and I can't wait until Marietta and Kurt's inevitable confrontation.
9/18/2015 c5 guest
PLEASE CONTINUE! YOU PROMISED! its been TWO YEARS you should have a job by now!
PLEASE CONTINUE! YOU PROMISED! its been TWO YEARS you should have a job by now!
8/24/2015 c5 Lifesgreywolves
Oh My Gosh! I'm so sorry about your job! I bid you good luck in finding another one! If fanfiction is taking up too much time to job hunt than please, please, take a break. Your well being is more important for our selfish needs for an update! Thank you so much for the chapter! I liked the cliff hanger, if you want to even further delay what happens you could do a falsh back on what happened in even more detail. I.e. Emotions, x-men reactions, did Kurt flee or was he driven out, ect. (I'm pretty cuorius on what happened) I like the bit where Nero's emotions were writen out, but I think they were too 'human' to be a dog's thoughts. The 'My Girl' part seemed similar to a dog's thinking style, but everything else was off in my opinion. I think a dog's thoughts would be more like: happyhappyhappygooddogmegooddog MyGirlsmilesmilegoodgooddogme. Although I have no idea how a dog would think, and this is your story, so you can do it however you like. I like how your character talked more about Kurts wounds, I kinda wish there was a scene where she was in the process of dresing them. The whole 'water glass' thing just rubbed me wrong. It didn't feel as though your charicter was stressed or scared, frankly it didn't seem relivent to the imedate plot. I can see that you were trying to make her apear stressed and scared. Maybe have your character cry, or show visable fear to go into the stabels, or something. I think you got Kurt's distress/fear down really well, but I think he recovered from the crazyness too fast. Also it's been scientificly proven that when sleep deprived any pain inflected on that person hurts a lot more than when not sleep deprived. In my mind I think Kurt should be thrashing screaming and passing out from physical and emotional pain. But over all, stellar chapter! Thanks again for taking time to write it and I sincerely hope you get a good job. May your writers block not sleep for weeks and be stabbed repeatedly. :)
Oh My Gosh! I'm so sorry about your job! I bid you good luck in finding another one! If fanfiction is taking up too much time to job hunt than please, please, take a break. Your well being is more important for our selfish needs for an update! Thank you so much for the chapter! I liked the cliff hanger, if you want to even further delay what happens you could do a falsh back on what happened in even more detail. I.e. Emotions, x-men reactions, did Kurt flee or was he driven out, ect. (I'm pretty cuorius on what happened) I like the bit where Nero's emotions were writen out, but I think they were too 'human' to be a dog's thoughts. The 'My Girl' part seemed similar to a dog's thinking style, but everything else was off in my opinion. I think a dog's thoughts would be more like: happyhappyhappygooddogmegooddog MyGirlsmilesmilegoodgooddogme. Although I have no idea how a dog would think, and this is your story, so you can do it however you like. I like how your character talked more about Kurts wounds, I kinda wish there was a scene where she was in the process of dresing them. The whole 'water glass' thing just rubbed me wrong. It didn't feel as though your charicter was stressed or scared, frankly it didn't seem relivent to the imedate plot. I can see that you were trying to make her apear stressed and scared. Maybe have your character cry, or show visable fear to go into the stabels, or something. I think you got Kurt's distress/fear down really well, but I think he recovered from the crazyness too fast. Also it's been scientificly proven that when sleep deprived any pain inflected on that person hurts a lot more than when not sleep deprived. In my mind I think Kurt should be thrashing screaming and passing out from physical and emotional pain. But over all, stellar chapter! Thanks again for taking time to write it and I sincerely hope you get a good job. May your writers block not sleep for weeks and be stabbed repeatedly. :)
8/23/2015 c5 3Ryuno chu
I really liked the look in to Marietta's day. You've got this character exposition down! I like her so far. I'm so excited to get some real interaction between her and Kurt soon!
3Ryuno chuI really liked the look in to Marietta's day. You've got this character exposition down! I like her so far. I'm so excited to get some real interaction between her and Kurt soon!
8/23/2015 c4 Guest
Lies
Lies
7/13/2015 c4 Ihaveideas124
You said you'd continue! You promised! PLEEEEAAAASE update!
You said you'd continue! You promised! PLEEEEAAAASE update!
6/19/2015 c4 Abby
Please continue! You have me hooked and I NEED to know what happens to Kurt. Please update. You promised
Please continue! You have me hooked and I NEED to know what happens to Kurt. Please update. You promised
3/22/2015 c4 Tina
I like your story. It's very interesting.
I would like to read what happens next.
Please, continue. :)
I like your story. It's very interesting.
I would like to read what happens next.
Please, continue. :)
12/7/2014 c4 123flywithme
more please
more please
11/25/2014 c4 Guest
This is really good. I've never even thought of this perspective before! Kurt was always one of my favorite characters, but I never thought he would run from the x-men. I like how you made Kurt delirious from all that running. It really gives you an inside look at his traumatized life. Also I'm intrigued by this farmer girl, is she going to turn Kurt into the M.R.D/Weapon-X or even the X-Men? Will she help him hide or send him running? Also nice touch with the fear of dogs, and Nero for that matter. Will Kurt help Marietta fight of the Sigma Alpha Pie group? And will Kurt come out of his delirious state or will he continuously stay frightened. This is a really good story from a previously unwritten perspective. I hope you continue this, its really good. :)
This is really good. I've never even thought of this perspective before! Kurt was always one of my favorite characters, but I never thought he would run from the x-men. I like how you made Kurt delirious from all that running. It really gives you an inside look at his traumatized life. Also I'm intrigued by this farmer girl, is she going to turn Kurt into the M.R.D/Weapon-X or even the X-Men? Will she help him hide or send him running? Also nice touch with the fear of dogs, and Nero for that matter. Will Kurt help Marietta fight of the Sigma Alpha Pie group? And will Kurt come out of his delirious state or will he continuously stay frightened. This is a really good story from a previously unwritten perspective. I hope you continue this, its really good. :)