for Hoodies and Cocktails8/24/2014 c1 Mort Dans La Nuit
WHY IS THIS STORY DEAD? SO WHAT IT MIGHT BE A SELF-INSERT, BUT WHATEVER IT'S FUNNY AS HELL
WHY IS THIS STORY DEAD? SO WHAT IT MIGHT BE A SELF-INSERT, BUT WHATEVER IT'S FUNNY AS HELL
12/15/2013 c4 stray
I'm a bit sad to hear your taking this down but I can understand. I just would like to ask if you'd leave this up and if even to put the original back on the site. they were both really enjoyable reads.
I'm a bit sad to hear your taking this down but I can understand. I just would like to ask if you'd leave this up and if even to put the original back on the site. they were both really enjoyable reads.
12/14/2013 c4 
5thetimewalker2237
I completely understand. I've had to scrape so many stories. We do this for our own enjoyment, so if it's frustrating that's kinda against the point. I feel for you.
But you seem to be missing a bit of etiquette here. When you kill a story, you are not supposed to take it down. Just leave a note that it's dead and leave it. That way it can still enchant readers who find it and the old readers can still go back to it (this one is too funny, I'm coming back here for joke material!) and then, if the idea to continue ever does strike, it will be right there, still intact. So I implore you DONT DELETE THE STORY!
5thetimewalker2237I completely understand. I've had to scrape so many stories. We do this for our own enjoyment, so if it's frustrating that's kinda against the point. I feel for you.
But you seem to be missing a bit of etiquette here. When you kill a story, you are not supposed to take it down. Just leave a note that it's dead and leave it. That way it can still enchant readers who find it and the old readers can still go back to it (this one is too funny, I'm coming back here for joke material!) and then, if the idea to continue ever does strike, it will be right there, still intact. So I implore you DONT DELETE THE STORY!
12/14/2013 c4 Oh I am Slain
I look forward to seeing the Gen VI fic.
Just wanted to chime in and recommend not taking down any previous fics. These kinds of uncompleted stories are what make this website so fun to explore. (Though it could be helpful to leave a note in the story summaries about them being abandoned.)
Cheers!
I look forward to seeing the Gen VI fic.
Just wanted to chime in and recommend not taking down any previous fics. These kinds of uncompleted stories are what make this website so fun to explore. (Though it could be helpful to leave a note in the story summaries about them being abandoned.)
Cheers!
12/13/2013 c4 2FireFox14
Its a darn shame, it was interesting while it lasted too. But don't get all depressed about it. I know how you feel, In fact I can't tell you how many stories I have cooked up, but never written down one. If you're not gonna be passionate about your work then why show it? But that's me talking, doesn't mean anyone else thinks that way. What I'm trying to say is, don't give up on a project too early. If you lose interest try figuring out what is it that lost your attention. Twist some things, rewrite a few sentences, cut, print, a paste until you blow open that writers block to heck. Don't take my advice, you don't have to, but reconsider ending something that just started.
2FireFox14Its a darn shame, it was interesting while it lasted too. But don't get all depressed about it. I know how you feel, In fact I can't tell you how many stories I have cooked up, but never written down one. If you're not gonna be passionate about your work then why show it? But that's me talking, doesn't mean anyone else thinks that way. What I'm trying to say is, don't give up on a project too early. If you lose interest try figuring out what is it that lost your attention. Twist some things, rewrite a few sentences, cut, print, a paste until you blow open that writers block to heck. Don't take my advice, you don't have to, but reconsider ending something that just started.
12/10/2013 c1 maxilos
Dark Cloud rocks!
Dark Cloud rocks!
11/6/2013 c3 11Thomas Drovin
Hi there and welcome back! Sorry to hear about your woes but I'm VERY good at waiting as I know we ALL have lives outside of Fan Fiction, at least you managed an update with a good explination that's what matters.
Now for my review...Eiji is VERY lucky he wasn't killed trying to help out that shop keeper, if that stone slab was a few ounces heaiver I think he'd be in the Spirit World by now instead of hospital! It was obvious that Korra came to his rescue, I mean how else did he get to hospital so fast? I LOVE the way Eiji's bugging Tenzin, I have a feeling that it will be happening a LOT if he's going to be hanging with Korra. I do believe she's SLOWLY taking a liking to Eiji but we'll see.
Anyway see you next update when you can manage it, I want to see how this turns out! Later!
11Thomas DrovinHi there and welcome back! Sorry to hear about your woes but I'm VERY good at waiting as I know we ALL have lives outside of Fan Fiction, at least you managed an update with a good explination that's what matters.
Now for my review...Eiji is VERY lucky he wasn't killed trying to help out that shop keeper, if that stone slab was a few ounces heaiver I think he'd be in the Spirit World by now instead of hospital! It was obvious that Korra came to his rescue, I mean how else did he get to hospital so fast? I LOVE the way Eiji's bugging Tenzin, I have a feeling that it will be happening a LOT if he's going to be hanging with Korra. I do believe she's SLOWLY taking a liking to Eiji but we'll see.
Anyway see you next update when you can manage it, I want to see how this turns out! Later!
11/6/2013 c3 kenegi
A earth hit to the chest? I'm surprised that he didn't die considering that whathisnameis got killed when the leader of the Dai Lee earth bend him in the chest. Granted the triad probably didn't go for the leathal hit.
A earth hit to the chest? I'm surprised that he didn't die considering that whathisnameis got killed when the leader of the Dai Lee earth bend him in the chest. Granted the triad probably didn't go for the leathal hit.
10/8/2013 c1 Biganime40
I really like this story it has a good concept and story flow like the first one but a better story structure then the other one. I hope you continue it keep up the awesome work
I really like this story it has a good concept and story flow like the first one but a better story structure then the other one. I hope you continue it keep up the awesome work
9/29/2013 c2 Thomas Drovin
Welcome back! My word that WAS a short strange dream...I had a guess it was when the impossible started happening for Eiji battling Amon and doing all that weird stuff. Must be his worried sub-concious about what he'll do when he DOES meet Amon and his anti-bending movement, OR the spirits trying to tell him something? I guess I'll find out next chapter huh? I'll see you there for the answers!
Welcome back! My word that WAS a short strange dream...I had a guess it was when the impossible started happening for Eiji battling Amon and doing all that weird stuff. Must be his worried sub-concious about what he'll do when he DOES meet Amon and his anti-bending movement, OR the spirits trying to tell him something? I guess I'll find out next chapter huh? I'll see you there for the answers!