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9/25/2013 c1 44smuffly
I really liked this! The way you wrote Ellie's conversation with 'Uncle Flack' felt very natural and I loved the way you set the scene, especially the idea that Flack was so bored, he started to 'give Jo a little hand' and tidy her desk!
9/24/2013 c1 21GeorgeAndrews
I can imagine this being like a chapter out of moments but one without the messers if that makes sense.
great job getting two very different characters to relate to one another and flack was so funny, kinda seeming awkward with a teenage girl!
9/23/2013 c1 12TheDeep
LOL! That last line was hilarious! Great work with it! I loved this! :D *Thumbs up* And I felt a little bad for Flack in the beginning, but very good point in the end! "the best bit was when they became tired and cranky he could give them back to their parents." Lol...I do the same thing with my little cousins...it is *so* true...I don't know how my aunt does it with those two! Lol, thanks for doing the challenge and I loved how you worked this in!

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