for secrets11/27/2016 c6 Guest
Please update this
Please update this
7/18/2016 c2 
7Loner Faris
There are a lot of grammatical errors in this chapter that make it harder to read. I seemed very choppy, more so than the first chapter. It may be a good idea to go through & revise it.
7Loner FarisThere are a lot of grammatical errors in this chapter that make it harder to read. I seemed very choppy, more so than the first chapter. It may be a good idea to go through & revise it.
7/18/2016 c1 Loner Faris
The story starts out strong, but the constant grammatical errors make it much harder to read (mostly a lack/misplacement of punctuation & capitalizations). If you went through & fixed them, I'd say this was an amazing first chapter.
The story starts out strong, but the constant grammatical errors make it much harder to read (mostly a lack/misplacement of punctuation & capitalizations). If you went through & fixed them, I'd say this was an amazing first chapter.
6/17/2015 c6 3SLIVERHAWKGIRL
Yes and update finely. I almost forgot about this story. But the leader? What's that's about? I been trying to finger this out and meaning to ask How the hell did Rogue get pregnant!?
So many questions so long of a wait for an update. But it's worth the wait this is a great story. Keep going and update soon! :-)
3SLIVERHAWKGIRLYes and update finely. I almost forgot about this story. But the leader? What's that's about? I been trying to finger this out and meaning to ask How the hell did Rogue get pregnant!?
So many questions so long of a wait for an update. But it's worth the wait this is a great story. Keep going and update soon! :-)
12/21/2014 c5 x man rogue
again what is the baby's name and gaw she sounds cute and adorable
again what is the baby's name and gaw she sounds cute and adorable
12/14/2014 c5 katherine
aaaawwwww she sounds adorable and so cute can you add detail in the next chapter to what she looks like and will rogue return to the institute
aaaawwwww she sounds adorable and so cute can you add detail in the next chapter to what she looks like and will rogue return to the institute
12/8/2014 c4 katherine
i really hated jean and rogue is my favorite character but now that i've read this i love the idea of rogue and jean TYPE ANOTHER CHAPTER WHAT ABOUT JEAN AND ROGUE AND THE BABY oh hey when you're done with this story can you make one kind of like it but with a few changes like instead of rogue and jean you could do rogue and kitty
i really hated jean and rogue is my favorite character but now that i've read this i love the idea of rogue and jean TYPE ANOTHER CHAPTER WHAT ABOUT JEAN AND ROGUE AND THE BABY oh hey when you're done with this story can you make one kind of like it but with a few changes like instead of rogue and jean you could do rogue and kitty
9/25/2013 c1 joriholic73
Good so far, extra points for the less used pairing.
Good so far, extra points for the less used pairing.