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10/5/2013 c1 85sageof6way
Depressing begining nice ending
9/28/2013 c1 Guest
You need to improve your grammer and plot. Also character dialouge
9/28/2013 c1 sigh
Dude. Really? You allowed the mob to acually get away and getaway with with beating and butt raping naruto. What the HELL!? Naruto better not not be all soft and forgiving. Please do not a obvoius mistake in doing that. In the very least secretly brutally and slowly kill each of the people that beated and raped him.
9/26/2013 c1 Guest
Sounds interesting!
9/26/2013 c1 giggity man
giggity
9/26/2013 c1 Guest
Very good start. I can't wait to see what happens next.
9/28/2013 c1 awefawefawefwaefewafewafaewfew
Nice intro. There are some questionable formatting decisions and some spelling errors in it however. For example, a lot of the bolded text should be italicized instead. Nevertheless, it's still a good intro with a good hook and a lot of action happening right off the bat.
9/26/2013 c1 fred872
Well your first chapter has certainly captured my attention. Also I'm glad that Kakashi is much more responsible toward Naruto and willing to go out of his way to improve his life. I like Kakashi in the manga but he was kind of a douche in the early parts.
9/26/2013 c1 sabery
Well i am glad that Naruto get Kurenai and Anko and Kakashi seem to fit perfect . I see a partener of Teacher and student in the harem i like that .
9/26/2013 c1 1white-winds hunter
Very interesting.
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