
10/30/2014 c1 Reldresal
Hey I just wanted you to know I found a mistake Krypton-Galifrey is actually in our galaxy. PM me back okay?
Hey I just wanted you to know I found a mistake Krypton-Galifrey is actually in our galaxy. PM me back okay?
8/23/2014 c2
6HarryPotterNerd1997
Love the idea keep going I'm waiting for more. Just check for spelling and make sure that your new chapters flow together, than your story will be a big hit :)

Love the idea keep going I'm waiting for more. Just check for spelling and make sure that your new chapters flow together, than your story will be a big hit :)
2/12/2014 c2 rin2004
THE FF is getting more interesting, congratulations! I'm very curious to read the next chapter and how the story will evolve!
THE FF is getting more interesting, congratulations! I'm very curious to read the next chapter and how the story will evolve!
1/5/2014 c1 Guest
I agree with Ghanaperu, I also demand you write MOOORRRREEE!
I agree with Ghanaperu, I also demand you write MOOORRRREEE!
10/28/2013 c1
59Ghanaperu
You've got a strong undercurrent of humorous sarcasm in this, and I like it. You did a great job with the overall tone, I think.
I only noticed one spelling mistake, and it's pretty minor.
"Thor put a muzzle on him and they went on there merry way." "There" should be "their" :)
But this is good writing, regardless of that little error.

You've got a strong undercurrent of humorous sarcasm in this, and I like it. You did a great job with the overall tone, I think.
I only noticed one spelling mistake, and it's pretty minor.
"Thor put a muzzle on him and they went on there merry way." "There" should be "their" :)
But this is good writing, regardless of that little error.
10/15/2013 c1
1georgeweasley16
That was really good. I want to know where you are taking this. Please update soon.

That was really good. I want to know where you are taking this. Please update soon.
9/27/2013 c1
19DraejonSoul
I'm interested in how you'll take this story. I like the snappy and snarky narration so far. I've read a similar premise where Xavier was also called in, an angsty story titled "A Villain(ous?) State of Mind". From the way this tale is being told, I take it it will be different?
Thanks for the read!

I'm interested in how you'll take this story. I like the snappy and snarky narration so far. I've read a similar premise where Xavier was also called in, an angsty story titled "A Villain(ous?) State of Mind". From the way this tale is being told, I take it it will be different?
Thanks for the read!