for Dragon ball Z the revived shinobi7/8/2015 c1 Guest
Chapter4 thair are 2chapters only!
Chapter4 thair are 2chapters only!
1/8/2014 c2 101bubbly
If you could add more detail and slow it down some so I'm not left confused...and feeling very rushed
If you could add more detail and slow it down some so I'm not left confused...and feeling very rushed
12/13/2013 c3 Rocker101
Good Luck with everything. :)
Good Luck with everything. :)
11/12/2013 c2 Nanai
I'm happy that updated this story can't wait to read what you have next.
I'm happy that updated this story can't wait to read what you have next.
11/11/2013 c2 DragonNOOB
A handy ability for jinchuuriki's is the ability to be completely immune to mind control and to an extent seals. Dr. Gero has no idea he has awakened a warrior of the past to fight once again and the first thing he's going to do make Dr. Gero wish he was never born.
Love the story, it show great promise, and update soon
A handy ability for jinchuuriki's is the ability to be completely immune to mind control and to an extent seals. Dr. Gero has no idea he has awakened a warrior of the past to fight once again and the first thing he's going to do make Dr. Gero wish he was never born.
Love the story, it show great promise, and update soon
11/8/2013 c2 
24thedarkpokemaster
Sweet I sure know that Sakura is very pissed right now at what has happened to Naruto lol shocked she was not brought back with the Edo.
24thedarkpokemasterSweet I sure know that Sakura is very pissed right now at what has happened to Naruto lol shocked she was not brought back with the Edo.
11/7/2013 c2 1kurifu gari
Hmm interesting although I really hope hinata does die in the manga die hard naruhina fan here :p all in all a very good story
1kurifu gariHmm interesting although I really hope hinata does die in the manga die hard naruhina fan here :p all in all a very good story
11/7/2013 c2 6Lightningblade49
he has enough control to speak to them at least at the moment to tell them what do and to dodge.
6Lightningblade49he has enough control to speak to them at least at the moment to tell them what do and to dodge.