for The Golden Devil9/28/2013 c1 Kinunatzs The Eternal
nice fic but what is Naruto? a Human with special powers? or part Devil?
nice fic but what is Naruto? a Human with special powers? or part Devil?
9/28/2013 c1 
5Exiled Soul Nomad
Great story and you gave Naruto a strong upbringing. I have to admit, I kinda see him as having a crush on at some point in the past. Anyway, best of luck on your writings.
-EDS
5Exiled Soul NomadGreat story and you gave Naruto a strong upbringing. I have to admit, I kinda see him as having a crush on at some point in the past. Anyway, best of luck on your writings.
-EDS
9/28/2013 c1 Shiki Ouji sama
Interesting story... please don't make naruto a piece for rias or other demon..
I hate that... BTW it's a good story..
Interesting story... please don't make naruto a piece for rias or other demon..
I hate that... BTW it's a good story..
9/28/2013 c1 llawssalg
Just pointing some stuff, not flaming(you are okay to think it is though). If naruto didn't have kurama sealed inside him or his mother, get rid the whisker. Naruto sister should have been fifth or sixth grade, earlier you said academy building cover middle to universty, so mito should be impossible to get on time to naruto place because the distance enough to make naruto late same as how naruto high schooler out first before elementary or middle schooler. For someone who supposedly get in contact with many girls(being popular and cousin) naruto shouldn't blushed and staring like idiot before smacked by saber first time naruto see rias, its actually lame and that blushing stuff happen only in some generic manga anime protagonist without backbone, so will naruto become one? Also you said avalon were masking naruto to make him normal, so how rias and apparently fallen angel can sense it? The avalon masking would be moot point then. Oh and healtly athlete narutoavalon are high value so he should not be able to become devil(super average ise draigg cost eight pawn), better go non devil route or reincarnated by sairaorg that have mutation pawn piece or adult strong high class devil, and please he should not die by just light spear, with avalon high defensive power, saber support to dodge and strike at the right time should also be counted, i write this just in case you go through the get killed by yuuma route that actualy worked because the target is isei.
Just pointing some stuff, not flaming(you are okay to think it is though). If naruto didn't have kurama sealed inside him or his mother, get rid the whisker. Naruto sister should have been fifth or sixth grade, earlier you said academy building cover middle to universty, so mito should be impossible to get on time to naruto place because the distance enough to make naruto late same as how naruto high schooler out first before elementary or middle schooler. For someone who supposedly get in contact with many girls(being popular and cousin) naruto shouldn't blushed and staring like idiot before smacked by saber first time naruto see rias, its actually lame and that blushing stuff happen only in some generic manga anime protagonist without backbone, so will naruto become one? Also you said avalon were masking naruto to make him normal, so how rias and apparently fallen angel can sense it? The avalon masking would be moot point then. Oh and healtly athlete narutoavalon are high value so he should not be able to become devil(super average ise draigg cost eight pawn), better go non devil route or reincarnated by sairaorg that have mutation pawn piece or adult strong high class devil, and please he should not die by just light spear, with avalon high defensive power, saber support to dodge and strike at the right time should also be counted, i write this just in case you go through the get killed by yuuma route that actualy worked because the target is isei.
9/28/2013 c1 18Stormking27
Good start i just finish watching the new dxd with xnovia in i would like to know if the 3 girl are in naruto harem also could u add saber and xnovia to it as well and what about the king story will that be updated?
18Stormking27Good start i just finish watching the new dxd with xnovia in i would like to know if the 3 girl are in naruto harem also could u add saber and xnovia to it as well and what about the king story will that be updated?
9/28/2013 c1 The Arsenal
Ohh, this is good start, but please add little bit info in the paragraph, like mito's age and naruto's age etc..
Ohh, this is good start, but please add little bit info in the paragraph, like mito's age and naruto's age etc..
9/28/2013 c1 RisenHolow
Great chapter man hope to see the next chapter soon because I know this story is going to be a favorite. just wanted to ask is naruto going to be able to summon saber's sword or ishe going to have different powers. good luck with the writing.
Great chapter man hope to see the next chapter soon because I know this story is going to be a favorite. just wanted to ask is naruto going to be able to summon saber's sword or ishe going to have different powers. good luck with the writing.
9/27/2013 c1 1ShadowAndrew93
Yo awesome story can't wait for the next chapter also why not give naruto energy wings or something like that
1ShadowAndrew93Yo awesome story can't wait for the next chapter also why not give naruto energy wings or something like that