for The Golden Devil4/15/2018 c21 the shadow overlord279
While I do typically prefer the English titles such as "Lord" over the various suffixes because it often gets excessive with the amount of "-kun," "-chan" and what not...you've done a great job of incorporating the terms while not going overboard. I feel the switch is a bit...off putting? We're 20 chapters in so it is just a really strange feel to switch it up now. Since you started with the Japanese suffixes, and used them well, stick with that. Or don't. The story is great either way.
Though on the English vs. Japanese topic: thank you for using English terms for attacks and abilities like Mito's chains. I never understood why authors were so opposed to the English. How many readers going through the English archives speak Japanese? Why not use the language your readers understand when you are writing? Online translations are not very reliable, ya know.
Anyway, on the overall story: I like how things are progressing and look forward to the first chapter of the new year.
While I do typically prefer the English titles such as "Lord" over the various suffixes because it often gets excessive with the amount of "-kun," "-chan" and what not...you've done a great job of incorporating the terms while not going overboard. I feel the switch is a bit...off putting? We're 20 chapters in so it is just a really strange feel to switch it up now. Since you started with the Japanese suffixes, and used them well, stick with that. Or don't. The story is great either way.
Though on the English vs. Japanese topic: thank you for using English terms for attacks and abilities like Mito's chains. I never understood why authors were so opposed to the English. How many readers going through the English archives speak Japanese? Why not use the language your readers understand when you are writing? Online translations are not very reliable, ya know.
Anyway, on the overall story: I like how things are progressing and look forward to the first chapter of the new year.
53/1/2018 c20 Guest
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2/12/2018 c21 Hoque007
A very good naruto DxD crossover story. Naruto having his own peerage and unique powers are really great. Though more of naruto's peerage members should slowly be introduced. It would also be great if kuroka becomes a member and a part of his harem. Lastly, Naruto being physically punished by Rias and Akeno wasn't great. I understand they were angry at him but rias is not naruto's king that she can punish him like that. Furthermore would it be okay for naruto to physically punish Rias if she did something familiar, obviously no so why is it okay for naruto to be physically punished.
A very good naruto DxD crossover story. Naruto having his own peerage and unique powers are really great. Though more of naruto's peerage members should slowly be introduced. It would also be great if kuroka becomes a member and a part of his harem. Lastly, Naruto being physically punished by Rias and Akeno wasn't great. I understand they were angry at him but rias is not naruto's king that she can punish him like that. Furthermore would it be okay for naruto to physically punish Rias if she did something familiar, obviously no so why is it okay for naruto to be physically punished.
1/27/2018 c20 reptoholic
While I am enjoying this, I wish naruto would be a little bit more dominant and not a submissive bitch. Seeing him stand his ground more and not give in would add to his leader character.
While I am enjoying this, I wish naruto would be a little bit more dominant and not a submissive bitch. Seeing him stand his ground more and not give in would add to his leader character.
1/27/2018 c18 reptoholic
looking good, I hope that he continues to get stronger and doesn't weaken as the story progresses. It would be nice to see him make more techniques and Not be only a swordsman and one technique guy
looking good, I hope that he continues to get stronger and doesn't weaken as the story progresses. It would be nice to see him make more techniques and Not be only a swordsman and one technique guy
1/27/2018 c17 reptoholic
I hope he beats him before vali interrupts..also hope he is Stronger and Smarter than him and is the True heir. Enjoying it so far. I am really wonder about the dragon aspect! What is so Beneficial about the lucifer bloodline? so far you just say that he can use the darkness element, you need to give some more depth about why it is special in comparison to the POD and Elemental Ice/Water, belial Nothingness...
I hope he beats him before vali interrupts..also hope he is Stronger and Smarter than him and is the True heir. Enjoying it so far. I am really wonder about the dragon aspect! What is so Beneficial about the lucifer bloodline? so far you just say that he can use the darkness element, you need to give some more depth about why it is special in comparison to the POD and Elemental Ice/Water, belial Nothingness...