for The Golden Devil12/28/2017 c2 
12Victori
It always amazes me how easily people in these stories are willing to give up their life and chance at afterlife. However, the chapter was really enjoyable as there have definitely been worse reasons
12VictoriIt always amazes me how easily people in these stories are willing to give up their life and chance at afterlife. However, the chapter was really enjoyable as there have definitely been worse reasons
11/21/2017 c21 Guest
An interesting tale and seamless with the cameos truly a fascinating read keep it up
An interesting tale and seamless with the cameos truly a fascinating read keep it up
11/13/2017 c21 Guest Z
This is one of my favourite fics I can't wait for the next update also good don't listen to the flamers their just dicks who can't write themselves. You should try moving the end about the reading to the top and hopefully someone does do it I love reading versions. :)
This is one of my favourite fics I can't wait for the next update also good don't listen to the flamers their just dicks who can't write themselves. You should try moving the end about the reading to the top and hopefully someone does do it I love reading versions. :)
11/10/2017 c21 Guest
Great job, keep it up!
Great job, keep it up!
10/24/2017 c1 1Kitanos
NURG? what the hell? weird scene break, I LMAO for a solid 5 minutes because I thought that was the sound Naruto made when he ran.
1KitanosNURG? what the hell? weird scene break, I LMAO for a solid 5 minutes because I thought that was the sound Naruto made when he ran.
10/22/2017 c21 Jose19
I want to notify you of a small mistake about Excalibur ruler it doesn't enable you to control other weapons.
The Excalibur ruler has a very dangerous power that enables the user to completely dominate the mind of anybody or simply reduce to a vegetable in terms of your mind.
This power is extremely dangerous because you can turn a enemy into a ally or convert them into a loyal slave.
It is a great power indeed because it enabled Arthur a member of vali's team to tame a dangerous monster like Fenton.
I want to notify you of a small mistake about Excalibur ruler it doesn't enable you to control other weapons.
The Excalibur ruler has a very dangerous power that enables the user to completely dominate the mind of anybody or simply reduce to a vegetable in terms of your mind.
This power is extremely dangerous because you can turn a enemy into a ally or convert them into a loyal slave.
It is a great power indeed because it enabled Arthur a member of vali's team to tame a dangerous monster like Fenton.
10/21/2017 c11 4Hadrian von Eveschatten
I just love Kaguya more and more with each of her scenes. Like her said, if Naruto wants to go far in this world, he needs to stop relying on others.
I can't wait to see Naruto putting that prick Raiser in his place.
Okay, Miya definitely taught Naruto the hannya mask manifestation technique. Manifesting them is one thing, but them having bleeding eyes is just way too specific.
Akeno needs to lay out her feeling for her favourite blond soon with both him and Rias in order to avoid any awkwardness and potential resentments.
4Hadrian von EveschattenI just love Kaguya more and more with each of her scenes. Like her said, if Naruto wants to go far in this world, he needs to stop relying on others.
I can't wait to see Naruto putting that prick Raiser in his place.
Okay, Miya definitely taught Naruto the hannya mask manifestation technique. Manifesting them is one thing, but them having bleeding eyes is just way too specific.
Akeno needs to lay out her feeling for her favourite blond soon with both him and Rias in order to avoid any awkwardness and potential resentments.
10/21/2017 c10 Hadrian von Eveschatten
The mother-daughter scene seems like Viviane giving Saber Lily and Naruto her blessings lol.
Is Naruto retarded or something? What sort of name is Bester?
Killing this slime pest is a mercy kill for it, because it is too good for someone like Issei. And why the fuck would any sane person see him as a friend? What's wrong with you?!
I only know of one person who can manifest hannya masks to drive fear into other people's minds, and that sexy lady is Miya from Sekirei. Since this story already has a secondary crossover with the Type Moon universe, it is not a stretch to think a certain lavenderette will pop up later on as well.
The mother-daughter scene seems like Viviane giving Saber Lily and Naruto her blessings lol.
Is Naruto retarded or something? What sort of name is Bester?
Killing this slime pest is a mercy kill for it, because it is too good for someone like Issei. And why the fuck would any sane person see him as a friend? What's wrong with you?!
I only know of one person who can manifest hannya masks to drive fear into other people's minds, and that sexy lady is Miya from Sekirei. Since this story already has a secondary crossover with the Type Moon universe, it is not a stretch to think a certain lavenderette will pop up later on as well.
10/21/2017 c8 Hadrian von Eveschatten
Well, Akeno is certainly not afraid to act out her attraction to Naruto.
The last scene with Naruto and Arcueid is so sweet! It is big on Naruto's part to have faith in her ability to restrain herself once she has drank enough of his blood, and Naruto will now become even more precious to her.
Well, Akeno is certainly not afraid to act out her attraction to Naruto.
The last scene with Naruto and Arcueid is so sweet! It is big on Naruto's part to have faith in her ability to restrain herself once she has drank enough of his blood, and Naruto will now become even more precious to her.
10/21/2017 c7 Hadrian von Eveschatten
Naruto's reckless determination to save Mito and Asia is brave at face value, but incredibly impotent and stupid under analysis. What the fuck can he do when he got his ass whipped so badly last chapter? Honestly, if I want to read about Naruto's shonen-induced retardedness, I would just go and watch any of the countless animes with protagonists who want to be heroes but without the abilities to back it up.
Kaguya helping Naruto to unlock his full powers is a literal deux ex machina. He doesn't deserve the power increase because he hasn't worked for it.
Wow, is Naruto a prude or what? What, Mito can't even curse someone who sanctioned her kidnapping?
Naruto's reckless determination to save Mito and Asia is brave at face value, but incredibly impotent and stupid under analysis. What the fuck can he do when he got his ass whipped so badly last chapter? Honestly, if I want to read about Naruto's shonen-induced retardedness, I would just go and watch any of the countless animes with protagonists who want to be heroes but without the abilities to back it up.
Kaguya helping Naruto to unlock his full powers is a literal deux ex machina. He doesn't deserve the power increase because he hasn't worked for it.
Wow, is Naruto a prude or what? What, Mito can't even curse someone who sanctioned her kidnapping?
10/18/2017 c21 REDD1997
Well this just got interesting the girls are captured, Naruto and the others are getting ready to fight and preparations are being made. Should be one hell of a fight when everyone sees each other I wonder if Naruto will learn senjutsu in this or not can't to find out.
Well this just got interesting the girls are captured, Naruto and the others are getting ready to fight and preparations are being made. Should be one hell of a fight when everyone sees each other I wonder if Naruto will learn senjutsu in this or not can't to find out.