for The Golden Devil9/26/2017 c21 confused
Interesting chapter but I can't decide whether I enjoyed it or it pisses me off.
As for it pissing me off well it ended in a cliff hanger, and it will likely be months before another update.
I could understand and accept the cliffhangers, if this story was updated at least once a week but, right not the updates are random, and constantly end in cliffhangers.
Interesting chapter but I can't decide whether I enjoyed it or it pisses me off.
As for it pissing me off well it ended in a cliff hanger, and it will likely be months before another update.
I could understand and accept the cliffhangers, if this story was updated at least once a week but, right not the updates are random, and constantly end in cliffhangers.
9/27/2017 c21 lou2003us
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
9/27/2017 c21 
6wolf191000
Exciting, Dramatic and Very Emotional! Those are the feelings I feel best describe this chapter.
I like the fact Kuroka told everyone including her sister the truth of why she became a stray and that now she is working with our main characters and their groups. I really enjoyed the (mini) battle Koneko and Mito had with Kasumi's servants it really showed that if they try the little kids of the story can accomplish just as much like their seniors (hehe).
Well I look forward to what happens next. Until next time.
6wolf191000Exciting, Dramatic and Very Emotional! Those are the feelings I feel best describe this chapter.
I like the fact Kuroka told everyone including her sister the truth of why she became a stray and that now she is working with our main characters and their groups. I really enjoyed the (mini) battle Koneko and Mito had with Kasumi's servants it really showed that if they try the little kids of the story can accomplish just as much like their seniors (hehe).
Well I look forward to what happens next. Until next time.
9/26/2017 c21 thor94
really interesting chapter.
botis family are really evil bastard, poor koneko and mito.
Hope for next chapters, you plan the so called party and security botis prepared won't work like expected and naruto and his friends merciless and REALLY painfully kill every single member of botis clan (especially kasumi and orotsuki, no redemption or excuse i wish both of them dead) and the ones working willingly for them until total extinction of their blood (a deserved payback for their liar that caused nekoshou extermination).
really interesting chapter.
botis family are really evil bastard, poor koneko and mito.
Hope for next chapters, you plan the so called party and security botis prepared won't work like expected and naruto and his friends merciless and REALLY painfully kill every single member of botis clan (especially kasumi and orotsuki, no redemption or excuse i wish both of them dead) and the ones working willingly for them until total extinction of their blood (a deserved payback for their liar that caused nekoshou extermination).
9/26/2017 c1 Guest
not everyone wants to write a crossover using the dimension cliche for a backstory
not everyone wants to write a crossover using the dimension cliche for a backstory
9/26/2017 c21 Sakra
it would be cool if you could create a wiki fandom page for the fanfiction characters
it would be cool if you could create a wiki fandom page for the fanfiction characters
9/26/2017 c21 Guest
When did Koneko gain her Second Tail!?
When did Koneko gain her Second Tail!?
9/25/2017 c21 shapeshifter340
Great story can't wait for the next chapter
Great story can't wait for the next chapter
9/26/2017 c21 8Quathis
Well, the Botis house is about to become extinct, or close to it. They really have no idea what they're bringing to their doorstep, do they? Until next time.
8QuathisWell, the Botis house is about to become extinct, or close to it. They really have no idea what they're bringing to their doorstep, do they? Until next time.
9/26/2017 c21 1Arc-Angel-Of-Fire
meh. to much going on aand not enough structure to understand it. still got to see another episode of Rias the Hypocrite with Naruto the Spineless so that's always fun. Seriously men are allowed their secrets it's not a woman exclusive thing relationship or not somethings are never talked about.
1Arc-Angel-Of-Firemeh. to much going on aand not enough structure to understand it. still got to see another episode of Rias the Hypocrite with Naruto the Spineless so that's always fun. Seriously men are allowed their secrets it's not a woman exclusive thing relationship or not somethings are never talked about.
9/26/2017 c1 marquis.shax
ugh ANOTHER disappointment. Why is it so hard to find REAL crossovers for DxD and Naruto? You know ones where Naruto is more than just a random fucking person in the DxD world where he's actually got CHAKRA and KURAMA and is a SAGE? This is just another lame ass story where Naruto is just a made up person who has practically nothing aside from his looks in common with the Manga Naruto and it's pathetic how many authors do this it makes the story sheer CRAP. It's stories like this that are making me lose faith in authors as they're to lazy to come up with anything real to explain Naruto being in the DxD world (or really ANY other world) an instead just have him born in that world an basically replace someone such as Issei or just be some random fuckwad who's weak as shit until he becomes a devil or some shit or is given a powerful sacred gear an gets a power boost right off the bat
ugh ANOTHER disappointment. Why is it so hard to find REAL crossovers for DxD and Naruto? You know ones where Naruto is more than just a random fucking person in the DxD world where he's actually got CHAKRA and KURAMA and is a SAGE? This is just another lame ass story where Naruto is just a made up person who has practically nothing aside from his looks in common with the Manga Naruto and it's pathetic how many authors do this it makes the story sheer CRAP. It's stories like this that are making me lose faith in authors as they're to lazy to come up with anything real to explain Naruto being in the DxD world (or really ANY other world) an instead just have him born in that world an basically replace someone such as Issei or just be some random fuckwad who's weak as shit until he becomes a devil or some shit or is given a powerful sacred gear an gets a power boost right off the bat
9/26/2017 c21 Elchabon
Great chapter.
Thank you very much for continuing this story.
Emotion and intrigue will kill me.
Keep it up.
As for the suffixes, mmmm. it's hard to say I guess it's more like you feel it.
The idea of openings / endings is eye-catching, but I think it would take time for your other stories. But, on the other hand, there would be a few chapters, compared to your other works.
Great chapter.
Thank you very much for continuing this story.
Emotion and intrigue will kill me.
Keep it up.
As for the suffixes, mmmm. it's hard to say I guess it's more like you feel it.
The idea of openings / endings is eye-catching, but I think it would take time for your other stories. But, on the other hand, there would be a few chapters, compared to your other works.