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9/26/2017 c21 Elchabon
Great chapter.
Thank you very much for continuing this story.
Emotion and intrigue will kill me.
Keep it up.

As for the suffixes, mmmm. it's hard to say I guess it's more like you feel it.
The idea of openings / endings is eye-catching, but I think it would take time for your other stories. But, on the other hand, there would be a few chapters, compared to your other works.
9/26/2017 c21 8Jebest4781
Great chapter man
9/26/2017 c21 9K. M. Donovan
my god it has been a while since you updated this. i was starting to wonder if this fic was dead?

still, nice to see that isn't the case.

also, awesome chapter, and i eagerly await the next one... though i do hope it doesn't take as long to release this time.
9/26/2017 c21 kage88
brilliant chapter can not await for more
9/26/2017 c21 dragun20
Yay update and would like to see a fanfic featuring the openings and endings for your other fanfics.
9/25/2017 c21 1Kurogano Yokaze
I call completely and absolute bullshit on Mito and Konenko being kidnap like they were.

The way this is written implies that Rias knew immediately that her barrier was broken. With the length, the fight would have had to be. It is impossible that it took Naruto and Co. so long to teleport that they could be just leaving as they arrive. Teleport is instantaneous. Add to the fact they knew Koneko and Mito were in danger just hasten their teleport.

Sure it takes a little longer to cast then something like the flying thunder god technique, but that longer is like 5-10 seconds. That fight was at least a few minutes long.

Oh, and I know you might try to argue them waiting for people to come together to go confront the enemy, but that isn't even the slightest possibility given exactly who Rias and Naruto are. This is a just a bad reason to put them in the hands of the enemy. Hell if you wanted to do it. You could have simply had Rias not know her barrier was broken and have them leave some sort of calling card since they want them to come.
9/25/2017 c21 3Markus-Antonius
Always nice to see this!
9/25/2017 c21 WindyCitySlayer1
Hope they save Mito and Koneko and hope they killed the kidnappers
9/25/2017 c21 Drakon45
Hate cliffhangers. Wrap this up.
9/25/2017 c21 2FinalKingdomHearts
I look forward to the next chapter.
9/25/2017 c21 Jared51
Nice chapter, I hope the next one will be soon
9/25/2017 c21 shephawk
I wouldnt mind seeing your openings/endings for your stories itll be interesting for me to read whether you do it is entirely up to you
9/25/2017 c21 3Raidentensho
not bad. hmm, i do wonder if diarumund and madea will help in this one. along with everyone's favorite sexy gorgon. pretty sure she would go along with it due to the 'saving family' task. i do wonder if there will be at least one or 2 more worlds will cross over in this. like Fate/Grand Order, or Fate/Extra like Nobunaga(Archer) being a woman, and Francis Drake(Rider/ Golden Hind fleet) as well. looking forward to it and more. until then, later!
9/25/2017 c21 15NinjaFang1331
Excellent update chapter
9/25/2017 c21 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
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