for The Golden Devil9/26/2017 c21 
9K. M. Donovan
my god it has been a while since you updated this. i was starting to wonder if this fic was dead?
still, nice to see that isn't the case.
also, awesome chapter, and i eagerly await the next one... though i do hope it doesn't take as long to release this time.
9K. M. Donovanmy god it has been a while since you updated this. i was starting to wonder if this fic was dead?
still, nice to see that isn't the case.
also, awesome chapter, and i eagerly await the next one... though i do hope it doesn't take as long to release this time.
9/26/2017 c21 dragun20
Yay update and would like to see a fanfic featuring the openings and endings for your other fanfics.
Yay update and would like to see a fanfic featuring the openings and endings for your other fanfics.
9/25/2017 c21 1Kurogano Yokaze
I call completely and absolute bullshit on Mito and Konenko being kidnap like they were.
The way this is written implies that Rias knew immediately that her barrier was broken. With the length, the fight would have had to be. It is impossible that it took Naruto and Co. so long to teleport that they could be just leaving as they arrive. Teleport is instantaneous. Add to the fact they knew Koneko and Mito were in danger just hasten their teleport.
Sure it takes a little longer to cast then something like the flying thunder god technique, but that longer is like 5-10 seconds. That fight was at least a few minutes long.
Oh, and I know you might try to argue them waiting for people to come together to go confront the enemy, but that isn't even the slightest possibility given exactly who Rias and Naruto are. This is a just a bad reason to put them in the hands of the enemy. Hell if you wanted to do it. You could have simply had Rias not know her barrier was broken and have them leave some sort of calling card since they want them to come.
1Kurogano YokazeI call completely and absolute bullshit on Mito and Konenko being kidnap like they were.
The way this is written implies that Rias knew immediately that her barrier was broken. With the length, the fight would have had to be. It is impossible that it took Naruto and Co. so long to teleport that they could be just leaving as they arrive. Teleport is instantaneous. Add to the fact they knew Koneko and Mito were in danger just hasten their teleport.
Sure it takes a little longer to cast then something like the flying thunder god technique, but that longer is like 5-10 seconds. That fight was at least a few minutes long.
Oh, and I know you might try to argue them waiting for people to come together to go confront the enemy, but that isn't even the slightest possibility given exactly who Rias and Naruto are. This is a just a bad reason to put them in the hands of the enemy. Hell if you wanted to do it. You could have simply had Rias not know her barrier was broken and have them leave some sort of calling card since they want them to come.
9/25/2017 c21 shephawk
I wouldnt mind seeing your openings/endings for your stories itll be interesting for me to read whether you do it is entirely up to you
I wouldnt mind seeing your openings/endings for your stories itll be interesting for me to read whether you do it is entirely up to you
9/25/2017 c21 3Raidentensho
not bad. hmm, i do wonder if diarumund and madea will help in this one. along with everyone's favorite sexy gorgon. pretty sure she would go along with it due to the 'saving family' task. i do wonder if there will be at least one or 2 more worlds will cross over in this. like Fate/Grand Order, or Fate/Extra like Nobunaga(Archer) being a woman, and Francis Drake(Rider/ Golden Hind fleet) as well. looking forward to it and more. until then, later!
3Raidentenshonot bad. hmm, i do wonder if diarumund and madea will help in this one. along with everyone's favorite sexy gorgon. pretty sure she would go along with it due to the 'saving family' task. i do wonder if there will be at least one or 2 more worlds will cross over in this. like Fate/Grand Order, or Fate/Extra like Nobunaga(Archer) being a woman, and Francis Drake(Rider/ Golden Hind fleet) as well. looking forward to it and more. until then, later!