for The Golden Devil9/25/2017 c21 
1Silvdra-zero
and the build up of suspense and tension was appropriately balanced for the near the climax of an arc
as for the change with the suffixes, in my opinion, I can definitely tell the difference in the paradigm/dynamic. in the chapters that did have the suffixes, it felt like I was reading the story in a way almost akin to the style of light novels. while in this chapter without the suffixes, it seemed to subtly drop the light novel-like quality almost immediately as soon as I noticed the absence of the suffixes.
I don't particularly mind either way, but in my opinion, i'm more used to the style that used the suffixes
regarding the matter of the Openings and Endings; i'm for having placed them in a separate fanfic; except, unless they are already integrated into their respective fanfics
overall fantastic job with this chapter and I look forward to the next
1Silvdra-zeroand the build up of suspense and tension was appropriately balanced for the near the climax of an arc
as for the change with the suffixes, in my opinion, I can definitely tell the difference in the paradigm/dynamic. in the chapters that did have the suffixes, it felt like I was reading the story in a way almost akin to the style of light novels. while in this chapter without the suffixes, it seemed to subtly drop the light novel-like quality almost immediately as soon as I noticed the absence of the suffixes.
I don't particularly mind either way, but in my opinion, i'm more used to the style that used the suffixes
regarding the matter of the Openings and Endings; i'm for having placed them in a separate fanfic; except, unless they are already integrated into their respective fanfics
overall fantastic job with this chapter and I look forward to the next
9/25/2017 c21 Jose19
This is a interesting chapter I noticed that you are using characters from the Naruto story but I have a question are they Human or Youkai because Humans can't use Senjutsu in Dxd as you know only Youkai or descendants of Youkai can use them.
This is a interesting chapter I noticed that you are using characters from the Naruto story but I have a question are they Human or Youkai because Humans can't use Senjutsu in Dxd as you know only Youkai or descendants of Youkai can use them.
9/17/2017 c11 Guest
I have greatly enjoyed this fan fiction so far...It's plot goes by a little fast but it's still a great fanfic
I have greatly enjoyed this fan fiction so far...It's plot goes by a little fast but it's still a great fanfic
9/7/2017 c20 2HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR
This is pretty fricking awesome so far. I'm really glad I came back to check out this story. And now I can't wait for the next chapter. As usual, your work is fantastic. Keep it up!
2HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NRThis is pretty fricking awesome so far. I'm really glad I came back to check out this story. And now I can't wait for the next chapter. As usual, your work is fantastic. Keep it up!
9/3/2017 c20 9sd74
I Pray for Mit-AH! Head hurts for the shear ridiculousness of what I was going to say...
P.S That is a tall order from Rias for Naruto to tell about [Secrets].
P.P.S Have any thoughts about Zeref?
9sd74I Pray for Mit-AH! Head hurts for the shear ridiculousness of what I was going to say...
P.S That is a tall order from Rias for Naruto to tell about [Secrets].
P.P.S Have any thoughts about Zeref?
8/24/2017 c10 sd74
...random foreshadow. A Blessing in disguise... (somehow it got a different meaning didn't it?)
...random foreshadow. A Blessing in disguise... (somehow it got a different meaning didn't it?)
8/24/2017 c7 sd74
Sad that he wouldn't be able to prank them into thinking that they became Angels instead.
Sad that he wouldn't be able to prank them into thinking that they became Angels instead.
8/19/2017 c4 Guest
Can naruto wield gram cause of his lucifer blood or is it going to reject him cause of avalon? The reason I bring this up because since naruto have the power of twilight, light, and darkness and wield excalibur cause of avalon would it make sense gram choose naruto as it wielder cause of his maou bloodline. We know excalibur was created by God and Vivian also was the sword of king arthur. We know gram was wield by Sigurd aka siegfried but we don't know who created it and has nick names"the strongest demonic sword" or "sword of the sun" and "the demonic emperor sword". I believe gram was created by lucifer cause if you think about it the name demonic emperor would lead to lucifer who was the devil emperor or the first devil and it possible he knows about excalibur in his time and created gram to counter it and it suppose to be pass down to his family but lost it and found by Sigurd but never master it cause he always use balmung and what if later on kaguya stole gram from sig when he join the hero faction and gave it to naruto as a gift it be interesting if he have both the strongest swords that are polar opposite to each other and can mordred join his peerage since vali have arthur and it be interesting how they act with each other.
Can naruto wield gram cause of his lucifer blood or is it going to reject him cause of avalon? The reason I bring this up because since naruto have the power of twilight, light, and darkness and wield excalibur cause of avalon would it make sense gram choose naruto as it wielder cause of his maou bloodline. We know excalibur was created by God and Vivian also was the sword of king arthur. We know gram was wield by Sigurd aka siegfried but we don't know who created it and has nick names"the strongest demonic sword" or "sword of the sun" and "the demonic emperor sword". I believe gram was created by lucifer cause if you think about it the name demonic emperor would lead to lucifer who was the devil emperor or the first devil and it possible he knows about excalibur in his time and created gram to counter it and it suppose to be pass down to his family but lost it and found by Sigurd but never master it cause he always use balmung and what if later on kaguya stole gram from sig when he join the hero faction and gave it to naruto as a gift it be interesting if he have both the strongest swords that are polar opposite to each other and can mordred join his peerage since vali have arthur and it be interesting how they act with each other.
8/18/2017 c20 shapeshifter340
Really great story please post more chapters for it soon
Really great story please post more chapters for it soon
8/20/2017 c19 Lesion
Re-read this story and its still as great as ever. Really like the interactions between the characters. I know you said you were gonna bring in Naruto characters but I honestly hope you don't bring in Tobi/Madara because that would be pretty boring with the whole bs being the same crap. Plus the DxD-verse has a decent amount of villains already.
Re-read this story and its still as great as ever. Really like the interactions between the characters. I know you said you were gonna bring in Naruto characters but I honestly hope you don't bring in Tobi/Madara because that would be pretty boring with the whole bs being the same crap. Plus the DxD-verse has a decent amount of villains already.