for The Golden Devil8/15/2017 c20 Guest
Have you thought about making a reading story for this
Have you thought about making a reading story for this
8/17/2017 c4 
9sd74
... Never would've thought to hear a nun say that to 3 devils and a human.
As Kakashi always says "Did you say something."
9sd74... Never would've thought to hear a nun say that to 3 devils and a human.
As Kakashi always says "Did you say something."
8/17/2017 c3 sd74
Can't wait for things to go haywire.
Interesting enough evidence has that perverted males and female are popular. Based on this everyone that is anyone will be interested to go out with him... maybe more
Can't wait for things to go haywire.
Interesting enough evidence has that perverted males and female are popular. Based on this everyone that is anyone will be interested to go out with him... maybe more
8/16/2017 c20 17EmeraldGuardian7
Just found this story and I love it. Hope to see it updated again soon. Keep up the good work!
17EmeraldGuardian7Just found this story and I love it. Hope to see it updated again soon. Keep up the good work!
8/15/2017 c2 1Trihexa.dxd.666
Fucking-heretic-cock-sucking-futanari-rias! He doesn't have a place on her fucking slave collection! And by first chapter on how you describe being beautiful like she's a fucking goddess then I concur that your a fucking-heretic-cock-sucking-futanari-rias! Canon wise she have complete set so Naruto shouldn't be there too begin with! In fact Rias and akeno are lesbians or on there way there before issei came into the picture! Canon wise said that they both view all guys look the same and issei is only different because of his dragon charisma towards women and him being a gremory peerage member that connects him into the slave chess of fucking-futanari-rias! You want to make people loss interest in your story then your fucking doing it right! And Naruto has Avalon! His not immune to magic but has high resistance towards magic so being killed into a spear of light by a grunt is not even possible you just made it that way so you can have your fucking futanri Rias have her new batch of slave! Fuck you! Get your fact straight! Logically Naruto being affected by spear of light by a grunt is not even possible so him died in that way is bullshit plot nonsense! Unless it was a cadre class then I will not buy your reasoning of killing Naruto by a grunt class spear of light so you can add him into futanri rias's slave market like a good cocksucker you are and even when you change the story of him being killed by a cadre class(kokabiel) it still prove that you'll do everything to add him tofucking-heretic-cock-sucking-futanari-rias's slaves then this whole story already become bullshit from chapter 2 and the rest no longer important! This abomination should be erase!
1Trihexa.dxd.666Fucking-heretic-cock-sucking-futanari-rias! He doesn't have a place on her fucking slave collection! And by first chapter on how you describe being beautiful like she's a fucking goddess then I concur that your a fucking-heretic-cock-sucking-futanari-rias! Canon wise she have complete set so Naruto shouldn't be there too begin with! In fact Rias and akeno are lesbians or on there way there before issei came into the picture! Canon wise said that they both view all guys look the same and issei is only different because of his dragon charisma towards women and him being a gremory peerage member that connects him into the slave chess of fucking-futanari-rias! You want to make people loss interest in your story then your fucking doing it right! And Naruto has Avalon! His not immune to magic but has high resistance towards magic so being killed into a spear of light by a grunt is not even possible you just made it that way so you can have your fucking futanri Rias have her new batch of slave! Fuck you! Get your fact straight! Logically Naruto being affected by spear of light by a grunt is not even possible so him died in that way is bullshit plot nonsense! Unless it was a cadre class then I will not buy your reasoning of killing Naruto by a grunt class spear of light so you can add him into futanri rias's slave market like a good cocksucker you are and even when you change the story of him being killed by a cadre class(kokabiel) it still prove that you'll do everything to add him tofucking-heretic-cock-sucking-futanari-rias's slaves then this whole story already become bullshit from chapter 2 and the rest no longer important! This abomination should be erase!
7/26/2017 c1 Reader
Some people are saying naruto is ooc in your story but I'm not seeing it the only difference I notice is that he's not as dense or dim witted as he is in canon and he has no ramen addiction. But that might be because you gave him a different upbringing .I like what you did with this story I just wish you update more often.
Some people are saying naruto is ooc in your story but I'm not seeing it the only difference I notice is that he's not as dense or dim witted as he is in canon and he has no ramen addiction. But that might be because you gave him a different upbringing .I like what you did with this story I just wish you update more often.
7/26/2017 c1 Guest
To the everyone complaining about naruto being an oc don't understand this is fan fiction not everyone is gonna write a character exactly how there portrayed in canon
To the everyone complaining about naruto being an oc don't understand this is fan fiction not everyone is gonna write a character exactly how there portrayed in canon
7/26/2017 c1 3Gold Void
This isn't a critique towards you, but HSDXD in general, of course Asia, and every devil for that matter, believe in god, its a fact among devils that god and angels exist, or there wouldn't really have been a war, so saying 'Do you believe in god?' is stupid it should be follow or something like that.
3Gold VoidThis isn't a critique towards you, but HSDXD in general, of course Asia, and every devil for that matter, believe in god, its a fact among devils that god and angels exist, or there wouldn't really have been a war, so saying 'Do you believe in god?' is stupid it should be follow or something like that.
7/25/2017 c1 shiroryuu012
i really tired of someone make naruto harem and replace some MC and why all of you who fans naruto make him OOC are don't like his true personality if that's true than ypu're not real fans you just dreamer who wish you are the one who make naruto
and please someone can ypu tell me where i can find fic where naruto OOC if you know please tell me i'm realy tired of this naruto is god who can do anything
and sorry
i really tired of someone make naruto harem and replace some MC and why all of you who fans naruto make him OOC are don't like his true personality if that's true than ypu're not real fans you just dreamer who wish you are the one who make naruto
and please someone can ypu tell me where i can find fic where naruto OOC if you know please tell me i'm realy tired of this naruto is god who can do anything
and sorry
6/21/2017 c19 3jiubantai-taicho
Excellent story I can't wait to read more I would love to see more so please update soon as for Naruto's harem I would like to see Xenovia in it too along with Akitsu and maybe some Fairy Tail girls or other sekirei anyway I really like the story so I'll be waiting for the next update
3jiubantai-taichoExcellent story I can't wait to read more I would love to see more so please update soon as for Naruto's harem I would like to see Xenovia in it too along with Akitsu and maybe some Fairy Tail girls or other sekirei anyway I really like the story so I'll be waiting for the next update
5/28/2017 c20 1YashuriDrakon
I myself like that you have honorifics in your story so I say keep em~
Amazing story and can't wait for more
Do you have the 5 girls that are going to be in the harem or are you still thinking about it?
1YashuriDrakonI myself like that you have honorifics in your story so I say keep em~
Amazing story and can't wait for more
Do you have the 5 girls that are going to be in the harem or are you still thinking about it?