for The Golden Devil6/15/2020 c1 thegrison
You need to give more back story at the start. The way you started it makes the readers curious what happen to the 9 tails attack or are we in another world or is this something different? I could not get through half the first chapter before calling it quits due to no info on the backstory. Good luck
You need to give more back story at the start. The way you started it makes the readers curious what happen to the 9 tails attack or are we in another world or is this something different? I could not get through half the first chapter before calling it quits due to no info on the backstory. Good luck
6/10/2020 c21 
1TheTailedBeastMage
I've had no real problems ready this story and I really like it but this chapter pissed me off because they say just stay in Narutos HQ because of the barrier so Koneko who knows she is a target just leaves the building to somewhere else like come on. I'm still going to keep ready because I like the story but this one thing just annoys me.
1TheTailedBeastMageI've had no real problems ready this story and I really like it but this chapter pissed me off because they say just stay in Narutos HQ because of the barrier so Koneko who knows she is a target just leaves the building to somewhere else like come on. I'm still going to keep ready because I like the story but this one thing just annoys me.
6/4/2020 c22 Guest
More please keep it up
More please keep it up
5/20/2020 c22 Shifter
Please update this great story as soon as possible. It's been awhile since the last update and I really want to see what happens next
Please update this great story as soon as possible. It's been awhile since the last update and I really want to see what happens next
5/12/2020 c1 Opfanster429
love the story line but why do they explain their new form or moves. it starting to put me off it
love the story line but why do they explain their new form or moves. it starting to put me off it
4/22/2020 c6 agnar
wow, that is utterly fucking lame. You're just fucking rehashing canon you lazy ass. I put aside that the MC is Naruto in name only to give this a try, hoping you'd actually veer off canon sometimes.
But you didn't. You slightly altered things along the way, but when it really matters, it's just Fucking canon again. Freed probably isn't dead, and he'll probably escape, *again*, like canon. Asia's gear will be extracted before they can stop it, then she'll be brought back as a devil to save her life, just like canon.
Lame, lame, lame.
wow, that is utterly fucking lame. You're just fucking rehashing canon you lazy ass. I put aside that the MC is Naruto in name only to give this a try, hoping you'd actually veer off canon sometimes.
But you didn't. You slightly altered things along the way, but when it really matters, it's just Fucking canon again. Freed probably isn't dead, and he'll probably escape, *again*, like canon. Asia's gear will be extracted before they can stop it, then she'll be brought back as a devil to save her life, just like canon.
Lame, lame, lame.
2/18/2020 c22 Emn93
I really liked the story, the development of the characters, the fights, they are very good, I hope you continue with this fic, I will be waiting for the next chapter.
I really liked the story, the development of the characters, the fights, they are very good, I hope you continue with this fic, I will be waiting for the next chapter.
2/15/2020 c3 Emn93
I'm really enjoying the story so far, I just hope that when I get to the most recent chapter, you're still wanting to continue with this fic because I like it so far.
I'm really enjoying the story so far, I just hope that when I get to the most recent chapter, you're still wanting to continue with this fic because I like it so far.