5/13/2022 c1 1I-Love-Trunks1
Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much! I hope you keep writing it.
Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much! I hope you keep writing it.
12/11/2018 c1 Ember28.Lee
okay, on the first chapter and I feel like Senri should be top since he's a model and Takuma is just so ... innocent
okay, on the first chapter and I feel like Senri should be top since he's a model and Takuma is just so ... innocent
7/1/2016 c1 Guest
update please
update please
7/15/2014 c1 Guest
Please update it soon. I like this story. I hope you have good idea on continuing this. Im cheering you! Hehe :)
Please update it soon. I like this story. I hope you have good idea on continuing this. Im cheering you! Hehe :)
3/30/2014 c1 kanaeee
Wow, this looks quite promising though its different than the other stories of urs , I couldn't help myself from grinning while i read what happened to Takuma serve him right oh Kaname! ur character here is quite pervert i like it & Oh jeez that was intense! Moreover , Zero's personality was also interesting i felt brisk when i read his part wash it brings back memorise how odious he is toward chairman hahaha .I'm looking forward to seeing what happen how Zero & Kaname their will be *getting excited* I can't wait to see what happens next!
Your story is truly awesome ! I just can't stopped myself from reading it I look forward to read more ! *smiles* I hope u find the perfect time to update it so until then take care
Wow, this looks quite promising though its different than the other stories of urs , I couldn't help myself from grinning while i read what happened to Takuma serve him right oh Kaname! ur character here is quite pervert i like it & Oh jeez that was intense! Moreover , Zero's personality was also interesting i felt brisk when i read his part wash it brings back memorise how odious he is toward chairman hahaha .I'm looking forward to seeing what happen how Zero & Kaname their will be *getting excited* I can't wait to see what happens next!
Your story is truly awesome ! I just can't stopped myself from reading it I look forward to read more ! *smiles* I hope u find the perfect time to update it so until then take care
10/21/2013 c1 WindofMay
Interesting beginning. I haven't seen enough to make comment on the plot yet, but the title kinda reminds me of a detective novel aimed at children. Not that I'm belittling this story, though.
Just, interesting :D I'm looking forward to read more.
Interesting beginning. I haven't seen enough to make comment on the plot yet, but the title kinda reminds me of a detective novel aimed at children. Not that I'm belittling this story, though.
Just, interesting :D I'm looking forward to read more.
10/15/2013 c1 8irmina
The first scene was rather hot, the part when the table turned on Takuma, he got attacked by the beautiful man. I am guessing Kaname switch place with Senri to protect his virtue, coz he knew Takuma's reputation? And Kaname has such a nice seducing skill I am sure Takuma will never forget the experience.
Zero is a hunter disguised as student? I wonder who he is supposed to kill. Kaname? Takuma?
I am happy you are still writing. Keep going. Are you going to update 'Feel with your Heart'?
The first scene was rather hot, the part when the table turned on Takuma, he got attacked by the beautiful man. I am guessing Kaname switch place with Senri to protect his virtue, coz he knew Takuma's reputation? And Kaname has such a nice seducing skill I am sure Takuma will never forget the experience.
Zero is a hunter disguised as student? I wonder who he is supposed to kill. Kaname? Takuma?
I am happy you are still writing. Keep going. Are you going to update 'Feel with your Heart'?
10/3/2013 c1 karupin sama
Finally! A different kind of VK fic worth reading..Please keep up your muse and continue this..please..
Finally! A different kind of VK fic worth reading..Please keep up your muse and continue this..please..
9/29/2013 c1 Guest
can't wait to see how Kaname and Zero meet
can't wait to see how Kaname and Zero meet