2/28/2014 c2 Guest
Please update. This is a cool beginning and I want to know what happens next.
Please update. This is a cool beginning and I want to know what happens next.
12/29/2013 c2 Guest
Good story so far. I hope you update soon.
Good story so far. I hope you update soon.
12/10/2013 c2 Swishla
Wow, this raises lots of questions for me. Great continuation of chapter 1. Can't wait to see how you fill in all the blanks and answer the burning questions.
Wow, this raises lots of questions for me. Great continuation of chapter 1. Can't wait to see how you fill in all the blanks and answer the burning questions.
12/8/2013 c2 Mozzdi
Loving this! Can't imagine where you're going to go with this though I expect some drama to enfold re Doyle at some point...hoping one day they make it home to Quantico!
Loving this! Can't imagine where you're going to go with this though I expect some drama to enfold re Doyle at some point...hoping one day they make it home to Quantico!
12/8/2013 c2 rmpcmfan
Why do I get the feeling that things are too good and this is just setting us for something bad to happen?
Why do I get the feeling that things are too good and this is just setting us for something bad to happen?
12/8/2013 c2 Em5y
I felt really miss your story :)
I love this story! The two different family dynamics are great, and I love how you've really develouped each child very well! Every chapter of this just gets better and better. :)
I felt really miss your story :)
I love this story! The two different family dynamics are great, and I love how you've really develouped each child very well! Every chapter of this just gets better and better. :)
12/8/2013 c2 Lktwh13
Definitely not what I was expecting, but I absolutely loved it! Assuming at some point, Doyle gets caught, it will make me sad when they have to leave their great life - and/or tell the kids the truth! SO glad you kept telling this story!
Definitely not what I was expecting, but I absolutely loved it! Assuming at some point, Doyle gets caught, it will make me sad when they have to leave their great life - and/or tell the kids the truth! SO glad you kept telling this story!
10/11/2013 c1 Swishla
Interesting start. I love stories where JJ and Emily get to be together during the nasty Doyle event. For one I'm not sure how JJ lasted so long being away from Emily cause I sure wouldn't!
Interesting start. I love stories where JJ and Emily get to be together during the nasty Doyle event. For one I'm not sure how JJ lasted so long being away from Emily cause I sure wouldn't!