for I Should Have Done This A Long Time Ago10/17/2020 c20 Mark in Orlando
Hey it's been a while , a lots happened since I was last here . I had a stroke , moved to Tennessee to be with my sister . Physically I'm fine now but my life has changed alot . Like Wally I lost almost everything but I'm moving forward . I finished reading your amazing story . Like every one of your stories it was great . Don't be discouraged by season three , Artemis and Will almost getting together but stopping makes me think Wally will be coming back at least I hope so . But you are the best writer on fanfiction . All your stories meant a lot to me . I still wish you would bring back the great one you took down .
The Heart of the Matter I believe it was called . Don't give up hope for Wally and Artemis . Spitfire forever .
Hey it's been a while , a lots happened since I was last here . I had a stroke , moved to Tennessee to be with my sister . Physically I'm fine now but my life has changed alot . Like Wally I lost almost everything but I'm moving forward . I finished reading your amazing story . Like every one of your stories it was great . Don't be discouraged by season three , Artemis and Will almost getting together but stopping makes me think Wally will be coming back at least I hope so . But you are the best writer on fanfiction . All your stories meant a lot to me . I still wish you would bring back the great one you took down .
The Heart of the Matter I believe it was called . Don't give up hope for Wally and Artemis . Spitfire forever .
4/18/2020 c20 Guest
I know you probably won't ever see this, but thanks for writing all of this. I'm having a hard time finding the words to describe how I feel about it. It was kind of like closure, but different I guess? Suffice it to say, this was really cool. Thank you.
I know you probably won't ever see this, but thanks for writing all of this. I'm having a hard time finding the words to describe how I feel about it. It was kind of like closure, but different I guess? Suffice it to say, this was really cool. Thank you.
3/1/2020 c1 Guest
I've already finish reading all your storys, so great work.
I've already finish reading all your storys, so great work.
2/27/2020 c20 
5Cnrbrr
It has been a while since ive been on here, and longer still since ive been writing. Decided to pop on and see how things were going and stumbled onto this story. Its so rare to read someones work on here that has so many amazing ideas and to have it be so well written. I was tearing up at parts, i was laughing at others and it really felt like the different stories really could have happened to these characters. It has been an absolute pleasure to read this, and i wish you the best for whatever you do next.
5CnrbrrIt has been a while since ive been on here, and longer still since ive been writing. Decided to pop on and see how things were going and stumbled onto this story. Its so rare to read someones work on here that has so many amazing ideas and to have it be so well written. I was tearing up at parts, i was laughing at others and it really felt like the different stories really could have happened to these characters. It has been an absolute pleasure to read this, and i wish you the best for whatever you do next.
2/1/2020 c18 20Lennox13
Shit. Ow. Could you remove the dagger from my heart, please? Gosh it was well written. Gosh it freakin hurt. There is no way to fix this. It simply is.
20Lennox13Shit. Ow. Could you remove the dagger from my heart, please? Gosh it was well written. Gosh it freakin hurt. There is no way to fix this. It simply is.
8/30/2019 c20 1Karma-WarHawk-B16
To be honest, no one ever runs out of stories to tell. But, if you need to step back for awhile, it's okay. You've done a great job. What I love about this book is that you gave us two versions of the ending: one where everything works out and one where it doesn't, but they still love each other and it's bittersweet. Thank you for everything, and I hope to see more from you. But, if not, there's always the stuff you already provided. You have nothing to prove.
Not to me, anyway. ;D
Take care.
1Karma-WarHawk-B16To be honest, no one ever runs out of stories to tell. But, if you need to step back for awhile, it's okay. You've done a great job. What I love about this book is that you gave us two versions of the ending: one where everything works out and one where it doesn't, but they still love each other and it's bittersweet. Thank you for everything, and I hope to see more from you. But, if not, there's always the stuff you already provided. You have nothing to prove.
Not to me, anyway. ;D
Take care.
8/19/2019 c19 Karma-WarHawk-B16
Not sure if you noticed, but I got notified that there's a new part (Part 20), but it isn't there. What gives?
Not sure if you noticed, but I got notified that there's a new part (Part 20), but it isn't there. What gives?
8/19/2019 c20 20Lennox13
Agreed. Was super excited to have YJ back, but what even is up with this S3? Like, ugh. Compared to the first two seasons, the style has completely changed; not for the better. But at least this seemed to contain some of the old maturity and story-telling waves of the OG seasons. Thanks. Love it when speedsters get angry.
20Lennox13Agreed. Was super excited to have YJ back, but what even is up with this S3? Like, ugh. Compared to the first two seasons, the style has completely changed; not for the better. But at least this seemed to contain some of the old maturity and story-telling waves of the OG seasons. Thanks. Love it when speedsters get angry.
8/19/2019 c20 The-Pale-Rider117
Kinda don’t like Wally’s portrayal here to be honest. I get that the point was to have Wally be a damaged individual in need of healing and for Roy to be his wise counsel and all that. However, it kinda reads more like Wally was this unsympathetic child who needs to get over it all ready and Roy comes off as real condescending in his advice. In this situation I think it’s really unrealistic for Wally to (without years of trying) forgive Paula and Roy. Furthermore, I think Wally making a jab at Crock’s looking out for themselves and Roy bragging(even with good intentions) about giving it to Artemis is very out of character for both of them even considering the situation. Too be clear, I’m not trying to put you down or anything (I’ve been a fan since the show was still airing on tv!), I just think this is a weird direction for you to take these characters and that more than anything reading this really just makes me wish that everyone else would be the ones taking a moment to reflect on Wally and give him some space to work things out instead of forcing some premature reconciliation. No offense intended by any of this (like I said big fan), but I really hope this isn’t the direction the actual show takes.
Kinda don’t like Wally’s portrayal here to be honest. I get that the point was to have Wally be a damaged individual in need of healing and for Roy to be his wise counsel and all that. However, it kinda reads more like Wally was this unsympathetic child who needs to get over it all ready and Roy comes off as real condescending in his advice. In this situation I think it’s really unrealistic for Wally to (without years of trying) forgive Paula and Roy. Furthermore, I think Wally making a jab at Crock’s looking out for themselves and Roy bragging(even with good intentions) about giving it to Artemis is very out of character for both of them even considering the situation. Too be clear, I’m not trying to put you down or anything (I’ve been a fan since the show was still airing on tv!), I just think this is a weird direction for you to take these characters and that more than anything reading this really just makes me wish that everyone else would be the ones taking a moment to reflect on Wally and give him some space to work things out instead of forcing some premature reconciliation. No offense intended by any of this (like I said big fan), but I really hope this isn’t the direction the actual show takes.
8/5/2019 c1 3 you
You neeeeed to make more full stories everything about them is perfect from the way you write the characters to the actions and dialogue they have it feels so natural like this is the actual character not some random made up character that happens to have the name Wally West and just happens to be fast. Your stories and ideas are perfect and I need more
You neeeeed to make more full stories everything about them is perfect from the way you write the characters to the actions and dialogue they have it feels so natural like this is the actual character not some random made up character that happens to have the name Wally West and just happens to be fast. Your stories and ideas are perfect and I need more
8/5/2019 c1 Ur the best
Do more full stories please your ideas are amazing and your portrayals of every character are spot on I would literally rather read your fanfics than any author’s books
Do more full stories please your ideas are amazing and your portrayals of every character are spot on I would literally rather read your fanfics than any author’s books