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4/17/2018 c1 AnonymousT
It seems like you have a history of leaving retarded flames that aren't even constituted as flames. I would suggest taking a look at your own stories and see how sucky of a writer you are and leave those with an actual talent the fuck alone!
1/3/2018 c1 Guest
Surely you passed an English class at some point in your life?

Why is everything contained in one paragraph?

Why is the text in bold?
9/29/2014 c1 Writing Master
Your stories need some work. Try to use paragraphs, don't bold your text, and use proper punctuation.
Also consider the direction of your story. Who is the main character? How did they become a werewolf? What are they hoping to accomplish? It's obvious your character is becoming a werewolf. If it takes a whole scene for them to realize that they're a werewolf and if that's just the plot then there's no purpose for it really. It should have been more drawn out.
But yeah that's all 4 me.
10/4/2013 c1 1mel2220
this sounds like the vampire diaries but I still like this story your good at being descriptive :)

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