
9/15/2015 c8
19Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967
Its OK take your time. I loved this story keep up the good work and update again soon!

Its OK take your time. I loved this story keep up the good work and update again soon!
3/29/2014 c7
6EmeraldStorm7
Great chapter! I like the whole assistant healer idea, it makes me think about her future and as a healer she can be a real asset to the Order, and if she is in the Order she can spend more time with Fred!
Missing Fred but I understand that she can't be with him at this time considering school and stuff

Great chapter! I like the whole assistant healer idea, it makes me think about her future and as a healer she can be a real asset to the Order, and if she is in the Order she can spend more time with Fred!
Missing Fred but I understand that she can't be with him at this time considering school and stuff
3/2/2014 c6 EmeraldStorm7
Oh Thank Heaven's she's a Gryff! I'm so excited to see where you go with this and what you plan for Neville, poor Neville, how will he cope with this when he finds out she's a Lestrange!
Great story so far!
Kalina
Oh Thank Heaven's she's a Gryff! I'm so excited to see where you go with this and what you plan for Neville, poor Neville, how will he cope with this when he finds out she's a Lestrange!
Great story so far!
Kalina
2/23/2014 c4 EmeraldStorm7
Ah the poor girl! Stupid Bellatrix! I trust that Fred will help her get all better though!
Fantastic story so far! Eagerly awaiting more
Kalina
Ah the poor girl! Stupid Bellatrix! I trust that Fred will help her get all better though!
Fantastic story so far! Eagerly awaiting more
Kalina
2/23/2014 c3 EmeraldStorm7
Ahhh I love the drama! So much screaming and crying, so much fun!
Great stuff!
Ahhh I love the drama! So much screaming and crying, so much fun!
Great stuff!
2/23/2014 c2 EmeraldStorm7
Flawless maintenance of canon characterization, Molly and Arthur were written to perfection. I had an inkling that she was a witch which makes her appearance all the more interesting. Can't wait to read on and see what dumbledore makes of this whole thing.
Flawless maintenance of canon characterization, Molly and Arthur were written to perfection. I had an inkling that she was a witch which makes her appearance all the more interesting. Can't wait to read on and see what dumbledore makes of this whole thing.
2/23/2014 c1 EmeraldStorm7
So you're officially the queen of first person pov! That was a captivating start to say the least, right amount of action to grip you and intrigue to leave you wanting more.
Brilliant!
Kalina
So you're officially the queen of first person pov! That was a captivating start to say the least, right amount of action to grip you and intrigue to leave you wanting more.
Brilliant!
Kalina
11/16/2013 c4 PrincessLollypop90210
Hiya, I think that you should make her go to hogwarts and have Draco recognize her, and her be like from a death eaters family where she turned against them, like maybe Draco's sister or something
PrincessLollypop90210
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Hiya, I think that you should make her go to hogwarts and have Draco recognize her, and her be like from a death eaters family where she turned against them, like maybe Draco's sister or something
PrincessLollypop90210
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11/10/2013 c3
4Rosebud1296
It's Okay so far. It feels a bit rushed and you'll need to be careful not to doing your toes into the mary-sue pond. Other than That's it's fine. It'll be interesting to see any relationship between her and bellatrix. But take it slow.

It's Okay so far. It feels a bit rushed and you'll need to be careful not to doing your toes into the mary-sue pond. Other than That's it's fine. It'll be interesting to see any relationship between her and bellatrix. But take it slow.
11/7/2013 c1
204NickyFox13
I'm intrigued as to what could go on next. I like your usage of description, which is vivid and action, which is fast-paced. Continue writing!

I'm intrigued as to what could go on next. I like your usage of description, which is vivid and action, which is fast-paced. Continue writing!