
10/19/2013 c2 Adrian
Great story... Great ending... Great potential!
Great story... Great ending... Great potential!
10/19/2013 c2 Jaxam
I've waited for the second chapter so long. Thank heavens it's here, and it did't disappoint. The complexity of Neville's sexual orientation confusing other characters(Harry) made me giggle. I've never gotten a credit in a writing piece before so it made blush like a little girl. 3 xoxo
I've waited for the second chapter so long. Thank heavens it's here, and it did't disappoint. The complexity of Neville's sexual orientation confusing other characters(Harry) made me giggle. I've never gotten a credit in a writing piece before so it made blush like a little girl. 3 xoxo
10/19/2013 c2
1Stalk Firepants
Well, I certainly hope someone's going to teach young Mr. Longbottom how to ride, so he doesn't fall off too many times

Well, I certainly hope someone's going to teach young Mr. Longbottom how to ride, so he doesn't fall off too many times
10/19/2013 c2 ADGDSJ229
Will the puns never end?! All in all it was a good chapter, took you long enough though.
P.s. I want a Matt C. Gif for this review!
Will the puns never end?! All in all it was a good chapter, took you long enough though.
P.s. I want a Matt C. Gif for this review!
10/7/2013 c1 MSmith
Disappointed at the low level of puns in this one ha-ha.
But truth be told, I'm not a big fan of FanFiction, but you sure make it interesting and I'm looking forward to the next piece of your work.
Also, I believe this is a step up from your other works, I mean no offence, but this piece certainly has a more defined shock-effect in it and makes the reader (like myself) come back for more.
Sad to see the story about Neville and Draco end, but I hope it will remain a good joke ha-ha.
Keep writing! Sending my regards, M.S.
Disappointed at the low level of puns in this one ha-ha.
But truth be told, I'm not a big fan of FanFiction, but you sure make it interesting and I'm looking forward to the next piece of your work.
Also, I believe this is a step up from your other works, I mean no offence, but this piece certainly has a more defined shock-effect in it and makes the reader (like myself) come back for more.
Sad to see the story about Neville and Draco end, but I hope it will remain a good joke ha-ha.
Keep writing! Sending my regards, M.S.
10/5/2013 c1 Jaxam
I can't but to sympathize with the poor Longbottom fellow and release some sweat out of my eyes.
I can't but to sympathize with the poor Longbottom fellow and release some sweat out of my eyes.
10/4/2013 c1 Guest
Poor Neville!
Poor Neville!
10/4/2013 c1
5nienerz
Hold up! Ginny thinks he was joking! Aww... that's so sad! Poor Neville! Does she only think of him as a friend? This is going to be a multi-chapter story, right? And not some random one shot, correct? CORRECT!?
(Runs desperately in circles and then hits a wall.)

Hold up! Ginny thinks he was joking! Aww... that's so sad! Poor Neville! Does she only think of him as a friend? This is going to be a multi-chapter story, right? And not some random one shot, correct? CORRECT!?
(Runs desperately in circles and then hits a wall.)
10/4/2013 c1 ADGDSJ229
That picture though, i cant. This is too precious, in a funny/sad kind of way.
That picture though, i cant. This is too precious, in a funny/sad kind of way.